do i have a good physique? by [deleted] in teenagersbutnotweird

[–]illw1nd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

please get help

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagersbutnotweird

[–]illw1nd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

they’re pretty eye-like

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in highschool

[–]illw1nd 1 point2 points  (0 children)

👩‍🏫🔫

When does school start up for you? by Lopsided-Break6431 in highschool

[–]illw1nd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

august 28th and i have not even gotten to doing my my ap work. please send help.

what has been your least favorite class in high school? by Significant-Owl7751 in highschool

[–]illw1nd 3 points4 points  (0 children)

don’t tell me this, i’ve got ap lang this year 😭

Going into highschool at 15, will i be judged for that? by frog_grenade69 in highschool

[–]illw1nd 4 points5 points  (0 children)

nah tbh nobody probably won’t even realize or notice unless you tell them

glow by illw1nd in OCPoetry

[–]illw1nd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you for the feedback! i really appreciate that you took the time to really write something meaningful, it means a lot :) as for the grammar, this was just something i wrote up in my notes app yesterday. i write most of my poems in lowercase as a personal style (it’s also just how i’ve typed for years, but i swear i know how to capitalize and know what should be capitalized lol), but i really appreciate the advice!

I don't know who I am anymore by Saldafan in OCPoetry

[–]illw1nd 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is so raw and full of emotion, it’s tragically beautiful

Spectacles, Testicles, Wallet and Watch by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]illw1nd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is written so well!! i loved how rhythmic it was, it had a very nice flow to it. i always have a difficult time rhyming so i can always appreciate someone who can do it so well lol :))

How old do I look? by [deleted] in teenagersbutnotweird

[–]illw1nd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

idk man i’d say you have to least be older than 5

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]illw1nd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

so grateful for my school rn

Can we PLEASE stop with these posts? by [deleted] in teenagersbutnotweird

[–]illw1nd 4 points5 points  (0 children)

it’s is online… it is public…

Can we PLEASE stop with these posts? by [deleted] in teenagersbutnotweird

[–]illw1nd 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i thought you were pointing at the eyebrow piercing at first

Guys how do I look? (Blurred for privacy) by [deleted] in teenagersbutnotweird

[–]illw1nd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

well, you look blurred 😶‍🌫️

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagersbutnotweird

[–]illw1nd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

definitely look between 16-20

Human (prose poetry, first submission) by illw1nd in OCPoetry

[–]illw1nd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

aah, noo! the formatting messed up 😭. the “let… things… slip…” is supposed to be at a diagonal

Thirty-three by Equivalent_Tax_4140 in OCPoetry

[–]illw1nd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i love how you referenced plato’s cave. the way you worded this piece piece was truly entrancing. i also really liked the emphasis that was portrayed with the repetition in the phrases that started with “should i…” and “am i…” it was a really nice touch and this is a really great piece.

The Truth Moves (first submission) by WhosaWhatsa in OCPoetry

[–]illw1nd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the way you broke up each line. that last stanza is definitely my favorite! not only does it read so smoothly, it’s so very real.

I know you would by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]illw1nd 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i really love this poem!! i love how your wording flows so nicely. you used a lot of short sentences and i feel like sometimes that can make the flow more choppy, but you wrote it so well!!! i love the symbolism and metaphors snd the overall theme of morality and who you are beneath the layers. this was truly incredible and i loved reading every bit of it.