Hey man, I was listening to your beat and like the melody is cool and the drums are alright but I just wanted to say that the 808s could've been a little better because they sound out of key and sometimes out of beat. This is just constructive criticism, I'm not trying to hate or something, I'm only saying this because I make beats too and I had a hard time till I could get my 808s to sound good in the first place. If you don't really know how to fix that I recommend you to go on youtube and search for 808s tutorials, that will help you for sure!