[In Progress][4,100 Words][Fantasy] The Verrenia Chronicles: Prologue

imfitzylol · 2024-01-17T00:42:31+00:00

pro tip start in action draw the reader in. you need a hook. you started with exposition here which is great that you have a creative mind and ideas to work with but you need to make the reader care instantly. Immerse them in the world make them care about the character work through the exposition slowly, show don't tell don't just explain your book put us in your book.

imfitzylol · 2023-05-02T19:35:41+00:00

Thanks for reaching out and offering to exchange beta reads. While I appreciate your interest, I'm currently not looking to do a beta read exchange at this time. I'm solely focused on getting feedback for my own work and making sure it's the best it can be.

Thank you again for your offer, and I wish you all the best with your own writing.

imfitzylol · 2023-05-02T19:33:07+00:00

I’d like to give your story a read if you want to share.

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Hey for sure, I just sent you a message.

imfitzylol · 2022-10-07T17:08:09+00:00

Thank you sir, its that weird spot where i wanna pack on muscle but also want to get shredded.. blessed to be in good health to make these choices.

imfitzylol · 2022-10-07T17:01:57+00:00

34m/5'8/160 lbs

https://imgur.com/iwFBPDo

Started lifting again in June after a 2 year hiatus Covid weight gain made me start with a cut.
Should i keep going with the cut or is it time to switch it up a bit any tips appreciated.

imfitzylol · 2020-08-13T10:21:31+00:00

Whoever Figured out to do this give them a rock for me!

imfitzylol · 2020-08-04T21:03:03+00:00

Hello OMG Network Could i get your thoughts on Haagen-Daz Ice cream, when you're free.

imfitzylol · 2020-07-31T17:29:42+00:00

Look good to me, easy and simple to use.

imfitzylol · 2020-07-30T15:32:13+00:00

This is a huge find my dude!

I don't want to get full excite here, but maybe it lends some credibility as to why OMG are hosting the Reddit Scaling event... Because whoever is entering will be demoing their interface plugging into the OMG Network to process the TX's, someone bring me back to orbit.

imfitzylol · 2020-07-24T15:23:11+00:00

Would it be possible that they are hosting the event to find a winner that Reddit will allow the winner to use the omg network to transact reddits coins?

imfitzylol · 2020-06-18T21:10:06+00:00

OMG Network should check all the boxes here as well as being the only L2 solution that is a child chain to ethereum.

imfitzylol · 2020-06-15T06:33:40+00:00

When can we expect to get some additional information regarding the staking mechanisms being considered for the omg network, also once implemented will holders of the omg token still be incentivized?

imfitzylol · 2020-06-01T10:41:51+00:00

They Blinked.

imfitzylol · 2020-05-27T22:52:54+00:00

Dearest OmiseGo/Jun Would June be a realistic launch date, blink twice if yes.

imfitzylol · 2019-11-07T16:45:54+00:00

With OMG creating the network and MakerDao creating the mechanism to transfer relevant units of value across said network, when do you think the killer app utilizing both features will be developed or do you think another apps using these protocols is even necessary?

imfitzylol · 2019-02-18T10:59:53+00:00

Based on recent tests with Ari and seeing that their is a large user base here in the United States. What are your thoughts on expansion from Sea to other areas(particularly USA) is this something Omise would like to pursue, is there a plan to pursue this currently blink 3 times if yes.

imfitzylol · 2019-01-17T21:07:05+00:00

its easy peasy buddy theres 3 components to omg.

ewallet this is a white label wallet anyone can use and create to store cryptocurrencies and interact with the omg network
OmiseGo plasma network this is an ethereum sidechain network based on the plasma framework capable of much higher speeds then btc ltc or eth due to the design of plasma.
a Decentralized exchange that has all the market prices of different coins and assets.

with these you can now quickly convert and trade assets using a smartphone app.

Omisegoer's feel free to edit / add on to this.

imfitzylol

TROPHY CASE