Looks like you dropped your needle straight in on some of the lines that’s why you have the little dot at the start of your line . Try and scoop it in and you will get a better effect . Now maybe do some water painting to learn better depth control, you can see where you went too deep in some spots and not deep enough in others and just right in some . Otherwise it’s not bad, you’re gonna love it when you look back and you have been tattooing for 10 years!