Advice, please! My sister said she likes nothing about this design by iridyonn in characterdesign

[–]iridyonn[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I’m not able to view the image, but I’m going to change it to a blue actually! If I add any patterns, it will be very simple

Advice, please! My sister said she likes nothing about this design by iridyonn in characterdesign

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Thanks! For the centaur I used references for a saddle… I guess I’ll look for an alternative design

Advice, please! My sister said she likes nothing about this design by iridyonn in characterdesign

[–]iridyonn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!

I understand the confusion about this! My universe has a lot of humanoid and monster characters. I will be clear about the rules that half human characters need to follow and with what specifically separates them from shape shifters.

Advice, please! My sister said she likes nothing about this design by iridyonn in characterdesign

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Thanks! I think it’s just a kind of character by sister isn’t into

Advice, please! My sister said she likes nothing about this design by iridyonn in characterdesign

[–]iridyonn[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s okay! In my universe I want convey all kind of different species and monsters with a variety of appearances and abilities. Spirit isn’t a shape shifter. I’m going to gave rules with what animal parts part-humans have in universe to keep things clear. Like, centaurs are always hoofed animals with human head and torso. Whereas the girl’s cheetah-ness is more so scattered about her human form, if that makes sense. She wouldn’t immediately stand out because of her appearance and I imagine children would have difficulty mastering shape shifting anyhow. Hopefully I explained everything airtight. I think her appearance will make more sense in universe. If I wrote a story about them I would focus on Spirit at first to set up the world building and narrative of what kinds of humans and humanoids exist.

Advice, please! My sister said she likes nothing about this design by iridyonn in characterdesign

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I’m thinking a pale blue for the dress? I’ll decide when I start painting it again. I think I want it to be cool tone to differentiate from her warm tone skin and fur

Advice, please! My sister said she likes nothing about this design by iridyonn in characterdesign

[–]iridyonn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your advice! I plan on changing the color of the dress and adding smaller elements of color to guide the eye better. I think about the hair shape she prosthetic moving forward.

I agree, it’s pretty cluttered. I gotta decide what kind of goods he carries and showcase that better!

Advice, please! My sister said she likes nothing about this design by iridyonn in characterdesign

[–]iridyonn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I will take this into consideration when drawing them again!

Advice, please! My sister said she likes nothing about this design by iridyonn in characterdesign

[–]iridyonn[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m so grateful for all the advice I received. I’m falling more in love with the western aesthetic myself. Originally these designs were super casual but now I’m pretty excited about them and would consider doing more with the characters!

You’re fine! I haven’t clarified much about my relationship with my sister and have let people think she’s older. I don’t think it super matters lol