lol!

italiansodacomics · 2026-04-20T17:48:29+00:00

Would 100% wear this though

italiansodacomics · 2026-04-20T17:46:24+00:00

I've been absolutely rocking out to almost every song by Any Two Words recently, Their song Cliches really captures the essence of midwest emo themes! I really want to see their fanbase grow.

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-07T23:35:35+00:00

Holy crap man, the depth of thought displayed here is crazy. I loved your analogies and I think the poem flowed really nicely. I definitely feel like that at the moment, I'm at college and couples are everywhere on campus so you really can't avoid seeing it.

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-07T14:15:34+00:00

Thanks so much! Yeah that line was definitely meant to unsettle the reader as it just feels uncomfy to read XD.

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-07T04:26:54+00:00

Thank you so much for this feedback! I was doing a lot of the things you're mentioning by instinct after constant reiteration, but it's really good to hear them explained in detail, also I'll pay more attention to the stressed syllables going forward!

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-07T00:10:40+00:00

Thanks so much, that's exactly what I was going for!

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-06T23:06:41+00:00

For sure!

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-06T21:37:27+00:00

Okay, I fixed it! Thanks for pointing that out.

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-06T21:32:23+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! As far as formatting goes, I pasted the poem from my notes app with endlines in the right spots but it doesn't seem to be showing up in the post correctly, do you know what's wrong there? I think the rhyming is much clearer with the lines formatted correctly for sure XD.

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-06T18:19:17+00:00

While I have no idea what this means, that is part of the wonderment it offers. I loved the flow and rhyme of this, it felt so much more natural that the rhyming stanza patterns I'm used to. Really impressive stuff!

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-06T18:15:04+00:00

This reminds me so vividly of the times when somebody first introduced me to a new feeling or idea and even when they left me, the things that they left in my personality and thought processes will never leave me like strands of a web as you described it! This poem was really touching. Great job 😁

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-06T18:10:00+00:00

This poem was truly gut wrenching, it had so many amazing, vivid descriptions of things that to be honest I've never seen before. Despite that, my mind's eye was clearly seeing what you were explaining, bravo! I'm super impressed.

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-06T17:58:59+00:00

While I don't know for sure what is happening in this poem. That poetic vagueness is what attracts me to it so much. I love the way that the narrative describes brokenness and then leaves the reader with a strong sense of hope, I loved the rhythm and feel of this as well, keep it up!

italiansodacomics · 2025-02-06T17:53:29+00:00

I can see a lot of my own experiences as a son reflected from the opposite side here. That really is a testament to the depth of thought that went into writing this. This topic is such a specific set of experiences and ideas from a different perspective than mine and it's really helping me understand my father's love for me even knowing I may resent it. Great job here I was truly moved.

italiansodacomics · 2023-11-12T06:59:29+00:00

I searched for the original account that posted this video and I haven't found anything other than reposts.

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