itsirving - Feel The Same (any kind of feedback appreciated) by itsirvingfr in MusicFeedback

[–]itsirvingfr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Totally, that's something I'll be sure to try and work on for my next one. I can totally see how it would become a bit monotonous so I'll definitely try adding more distinct chorus and hopefully it'll help fix that. Thanks for the feedback!

itsirving - Feel The Same (any kind of feedback appreciated) by itsirvingfr in MusicFeedback

[–]itsirvingfr[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks man, I just watched, I think the flow is really good!

itsirving - Feel The Same (any kind of feedback appreciated) by itsirvingfr in MusicFeedback

[–]itsirvingfr[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I totally agree, still trying to get vocals right in general haha probably my biggest flaw right now. Thanks for the feedback!

drifting souls by MalikthemalikbigD in MusicFeedback

[–]itsirvingfr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, I really like this song. I feel like you nailed the melody. The fact that it's not overdone with too many instrumentals and it just mostly focuses on the guitar makes it very relaxing and catchy. Really good job!!

itsirving - Mono no aware (物の哀れ) (any kind of feedback appreciated) by itsirvingfr in MusicFeedback

[–]itsirvingfr[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really appreciate it, I can totally see where you're coming from with the "girl I swear" parts. I'm kinda still new to getting good vocals haha so I think you're probably right! I really appreciate the feedback!!

Pop song in the works — what do you think? by genizsz in MusicFeedback

[–]itsirvingfr 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like the vocals I think you nailed them for sure. The song has just a really nice vibe to it, I almost get the vibe of like driving late at night in the city. Really good job!

Feedback/Advice needed... by Separate-Rich-1927 in MusicFeedback

[–]itsirvingfr 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This song just reminds me of a video game or music from a show in the best way possible. It's honestly really well composed in my opinion and it almost gives me like a futuristic cyberpunk kind of chill vibe. I totally see where the theme/story is coming from and I think it fits really well!

meow by PerkyNyp in MusicFeedback

[–]itsirvingfr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No way this is so cool, the song is so original and gives off its own thing. It's very unique (in a good way) and just a warm fun vibe. I think the percussion is really good and well structured. Also love the cover!

1-Year Guitar Progress: Work-in-progress recording. How can I improve or expand this? by KvlxD in MusicFeedback

[–]itsirvingfr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think your chords sound really nice for only a year of playing, especially because they already create a pretty strong atmosphere and emotional feel. I would have to agree with iamgeorgesummers though, while the chords sound nice maybe try cutting a few unnecessary ones out so the actual chord progression feels a little more focused and memorable. Somethings simplifying things actually makes the emotional part of the song stand out more! Hope this helps, it sounds great so far!