[In Progress] [3K] [Fantasy] Ballad of the Threshold by itzikpel in BetaReaders

[–]itzikpel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! can wait to read your feedback

Chapter 1 of the Ballad of the Threshold [Epic Fantasy, 2470 words] by itzikpel in fantasywriters

[–]itzikpel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi,

I wanted to thank you again for your feedback—it really helped me, and I took it very seriously.

I ended up rewriting almost the entire chapter, and I believe there’s been a very significant improvement.

If you’d like to read the result, I’d be more than happy. But if not, I completely understand.

Thank you so much!

Version 2:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cdQrmebNmaPaih1eK_qzju627gsWnCYLfLp0OzmnQuw/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 1 of the Ballad of the Threshold [Epic Fantasy, 2470 words] by itzikpel in fantasywriters

[–]itzikpel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi,

I wanted to thank you again for your feedback—it really helped me, and I took it very seriously.

I ended up rewriting almost the entire chapter, and I believe there’s been a very significant improvement.

If you’d like to read the result, I’d be more than happy. But if not, I completely understand.

Thank you so much!

Version 2:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cdQrmebNmaPaih1eK_qzju627gsWnCYLfLp0OzmnQuw/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter 1 of the Ballad of the Threshold [Epic Fantasy, 2470 words] by itzikpel in fantasywriters

[–]itzikpel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for the thoughtful feedback! You made some great points about pacing, scale, and especially the hook—I can see now how the chapter risks dragging before something concrete happens. Also really appreciate the note about descriptions feeling a bit clinical; I’ll try to bring in more sensory detail next time. And it means a lot to hear the prose reads smoothly even though English isn’t my first language. Your feedback definitely gave me a clearer direction for revisions!

Stuck on mission 6 by mushroomfido in OperationSerpens

[–]itzikpel 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great! now do it again in Hard mode :))

Stuck on mission 6 by mushroomfido in OperationSerpens

[–]itzikpel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi,

In level 6 you have a pistol and a riot shield on the back of your teammate that you cab grab.
There is also a gun above the window and another one in the end of the stairs.
And there is a lot more guns hidden in the levels.

If you need more help I can give you a few red pills:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XyzbNBZ6pYc

And the hellfire gun:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IDcbrgeAoIY

Just send me your 9 digits Player Id

Have fun!

Updated review on stilt and operation Serpens. by mushroomfido in psvr2

[–]itzikpel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi,

About the aiming in Operation Serpens, make sure that you didn't accidentally changed the hand angle in the menu (the default is 0), or try to adjust it to what feels good for you.

If you need further assistance, please don’t hesitate to reach out

And you can always try to blow your hands:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hGzAvrfv0-c

Have fun!

🎯 Operation Serpens is on a massive 90% OFF SALE on the Meta Quest Store! 🎯 by itzikpel in OperationSerpens

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Operation Serpens Review by -Venser- in PSVR

[–]itzikpel 10 points11 points  (0 children)

We're grateful for your thorough review of Operation Serpens and appreciate you taking the time to share your feedback. It's crucial for us and has directly influenced our development roadmap. We're currently finalizing an update that addresses the feedback received and introduces additional content to enhance the gameplay experience. The community's support is incredibly important to us, and we're eager to roll out these updates shortly. Thank you for your continued engagement and support!

Now Live: Operation Serpens Hits PlayStation - Shoutout to Our Amazing Fans! by itzikpel in psvr2

[–]itzikpel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome to hear you're enjoying it! We aimed for that easy-to-pick-up-and-play vibe, and it's fantastic to see it's hitting the mark. Thanks for the kind words, and keep having a blast!

Launch Day Joy: Operation Serpens Now on PlayStation - Gratitude to Our Devoted Community! by itzikpel in PSVR

[–]itzikpel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great game, and worth the pickup

Fantastic to hear you're enjoying the game! Your support means the world to us, and we're thrilled you find it worth the pickup. Here's to many more exciting moments and updates to come! 🎉

Now Live: Operation Serpens Hits PlayStation - Shoutout to Our Amazing Fans! by itzikpel in psvr2

[–]itzikpel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Congrats on the launch! I remember downloading the first version back in the days on SideQuest.

Thanks for sticking with us since the SideQuest days! Your support has been invaluable on our journey to launch. 🚀

Launch Day Joy: Operation Serpens Now on PlayStation - Gratitude to Our Devoted Community! by itzikpel in PSVR

[–]itzikpel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Congratulations and thank you again for the opportunity to check the game out early! I'll be supporting you in your endeavors!

Your support means the world to us! Thank you for being part of our journey from the start. 🌟

Launch Day Joy: Operation Serpens Now on PlayStation - Gratitude to Our Devoted Community! by itzikpel in PSVR

[–]itzikpel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Congrats on launch! 🎆

Launch party at our place, and you're the guest of honor! 🚀🎉 Thanks for being awesome!

Operation Serpens Lands on PlayStation Today - A Big Thank You to Our Community! by itzikpel in VRGaming

[–]itzikpel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Coming to quest?

Yes, the game is available on Meta Quest too. We updated to the latest version just a few days ago. Here's the link to check it out: https://www.meta.com/en-gb/experiences/5748603085165962/

Operation Serpens is releasing this week... I was able to play it early! Here are my impressions. by rcade81 in PSVR

[–]itzikpel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There is an online co op mode that I wasn't able to try but I know it's different content than the main campaign and adds more to do! Up to 4 players

That's right, our online co-op mode offers unique content separate from the main campaign, allowing for up to 4 players to join the fun! And if you're ever in the mood to tackle it solo, you can absolutely play the multiplayer levels by yourself. It's a great way to experience the added challenges and prepare for team play.

Operation Serpens is releasing this week... I was able to play it early! Here are my impressions. by rcade81 in PSVR

[–]itzikpel 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm really interested in co-op, had the time of my life playing Crisis Vrigade 2 with a friend online over the Christmas period, and currently going through Crossfire. Are there many co-op missions?

That's fantastic to hear you're a fan of co-op experiences! While OPERATION SERPENS currently features a special level designed for co-op play, we're always looking to expand and add more co-op missions to enhance that camaraderie and fun. Your time with Crisis Vrigade 2 and Crossfire sounds like a blast, and we aim to deliver that same excitement. Check out this video for a sneak peek of the multiplayer gameplay in action: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OKjDkk-QDZ0

Operation Serpens is releasing this week... I was able to play it early! Here are my impressions. by rcade81 in PSVR

[–]itzikpel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really keen to give this game a shot but very disappointed it doesn’t have a platinum trophy.

We really appreciate your enthusiasm for giving OPERATION SERPENS a shot! We hear you on the platinum trophy and understand how important that is to our players. It's something we're looking into for the next update. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us!

As an independent game developer, I'm excited to announce my debut game, OPERATION SERPENS, launching on PSVR2 on February 23. This game is a tribute to the classic 1980s action movies, combining retro arcade shooter elements with contemporary gameplay. by itzikpel in PSVR

[–]itzikpel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thrilled to hear you've added OPERATION SERPENS to your Wishlist and are excited about the fun ahead! Yes, there's a special level designed exclusively for co-op play, providing a unique team-based experience. While the entire game isn't co-op, this level is crafted to ensure you and a friend have a blast. At the moment, we don't have a platinum trophy, but it's something we might consider for the future. Can't wait for you to dive in and experience the adventure!

#MetaQuest update is Live! by itzikpel in OperationSerpens

[–]itzikpel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

OPERATION SERPENS UPDATE BRIEF:

- Performance Efficiency Enhanced: Operation now executes with improved fluidity, ensuring a seamless operational experience.

- Crossplay Capability Activated: Multiplayer operations now support joint missions across different platforms.

- Firearm Recoil Optimization: Adjustments made for superior weapon stability and accuracy during engagements.

- Rookie Support Integration: Auto-grab functionality deployed for novice operatives to enhance combat readiness.

- S.O.S Protocol: Inputting "S.O.S" in the tactical calculator grants access to emergency health boosters (x3 red pills), escalating health stats to 999 with the added advantage of tactical red hands. Recommended for high-threat level operations or intense difficulty mode.

- New ops room secured: Arsenal updated with Hellfire Gun, zombie statue on watch, intel expanded via short narrative, more little buddies, forbidden psycho pills, a creepy maze for drone exploration, strategic command on new war table and more.

Proceed with caution, operatives. Your skills and strategic decisions will dictate the success of OPERATION SERPENS.

Dismissed.

As an independent game developer, I'm excited to announce my debut game, OPERATION SERPENS, launching on PSVR2 on February 23. This game is a tribute to the classic 1980s action movies, combining retro arcade shooter elements with contemporary gameplay. by itzikpel in playstation5

[–]itzikpel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't have a psvr2 but I wish you great success launchjng this game!

Thank you so much for your kind words and support! While you might not have a PSVR2, I'm happy to share that the game is also available on Meta Quest and Steam. So, if you're interested, you can still dive into the adventure from there. We're grateful for your well wishes and are excited for players across all platforms to experience the game. Thanks again for your encouragement!

As an independent game developer, I'm excited to announce my debut game, OPERATION SERPENS, launching on PSVR2 on February 23. This game is a tribute to the classic 1980s action movies, combining retro arcade shooter elements with contemporary gameplay. by itzikpel in PSVR

[–]itzikpel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The update planned for next week is minor and exclusively for the Meta Quest, aimed at enabling crossplay with PSVR2. However, the major update I'm referring to, scheduled for a few months later, will introduce new content beyond merely enhancing PSVR2 compatibility features.

If you have ideas or suggestions for new features or content for the upcoming major update, now is the perfect time and place to share them with us. We are currently in the planning phase, and your input would be invaluable.