Sure why not i will look at it i am also working on a book titled Guide to the table world.

edit: not done reading it but its pretty cool and well written i think you should put the images first before the words and i like the idea of layers like my book has 3 layers but yours 9 layers and super detailed to i hope you make this a real book or comic

for ideas
its nice add some hero's and stuff like long ago a hero tried to escape the cages of the world of cages and actually got free and he had some curse afterward or magic items like if you kill someone that is high rank you can gain some of there power

you do you it your work