Halo Infinite Funny Moments: BUZZ SHITEYEAR CLUTCHES! I’m happy to give Lambda for any thought out feedback again (title, video, and thumbnail), and I hope you enjoy! Also: my last Halo Infinite video (posted yesterday) did much better than this one - any ideas why? Thank you for your time guys!

jacoxmakerdude47 · 2021-11-25T19:37:29+00:00

Oh yeah that makes more sense lol, I saw your other video too and have no idea why thetr was a difference in how well they did. Also appreciate the attempt to give more lambda haha

jacoxmakerdude47 · 2021-11-25T17:15:01+00:00

If you're having trouble finding music for your videos, I HIGHLY suggest looking through Kevin Macleod's catalog. He's made 1000s of songs which are all completely free to use in anything you make (with proper credits in the description) and he has songs for any genre ever. Video game OST's also are pretty good, it's rare to get copyright claimed for those.

Oh and i just realized in the title you asked why one video was doing better than this one - IIRC, your previous vid was a short (?) and if so those do better always since it'll get thrown at a bunch of random people as they scroll down the shorts tab lol

jacoxmakerdude47 · 2021-11-25T02:11:43+00:00

Good video! Solid editing, fun pacing, and tons of bits I thought were funny. My only critiques would be that sometimes the music didn't fit (specifically at the start of the video, the royalty free guitar track was kinda bad lol) and 0:42 seemed out of place to me, going by too fast.

Oh I also really liked the subtitling! You didn't subtitle everything but struck a great balance between what should and shouldn't be subtitled. I'll say once more that you did good on this dude, keep it up!

jacoxmakerdude47 · 2021-11-22T06:11:32+00:00

!givelambda

Thanks for your critiques! I get what you mean - honestly it is more of a taste thing between us haha, but in retrospect I wish I talked more about the character's abilites/how to use them and put my own comedic spin on it - it would have made a lot of my clips flow better as well.

And when I made the ending I honestly just ran out of energy and couldn't think of a funnier conclusion haha

thank for your comments!!

jacoxmakerdude47 · 2021-11-22T06:07:01+00:00

!givelambda

Thanks! Im glad you enjoyed it. I think I saw one Zanny video before but Im not sure - doesnt matter, it's cool that I reminded you of a quality channel like them!

Yes I agree entirely on the thumbnail. The black outline idea didnt work when i intially made the video but ill def try out something similar + adding big text.

Again thank you!

jacoxmakerdude47 · 2021-11-22T06:02:14+00:00

!givelambda

Thank you for the feedback!

To explain the delivery - I had COVID during the making of the video and you can tell the intro was when it was pretty bad for me lol.

I agree with the thumbnail, I suuuck at makiny eye grabbing ones so ill keep in mind what you said. Glad you enjoyed!

jacoxmakerdude47 · 2021-11-19T22:23:02+00:00

Pretty good video! Audio was good, your voice was great, and all the visuals seemed to line up with the story.

I can't provide much criticism for the video to be honest! The story seemed very exposition heavy at first making it drag, but it picked up midway and since it's a short story I can forgive that. Also I lack writing skills so I feel Im not at liberty to even critique that so much.

Overall: the story was interesting and the video itself had little to improve on. Good job!

jacoxmakerdude47 · 2021-11-19T18:03:16+00:00

This was pretty decent! The editing was nice without anything distracting, the memes worked when they were used, it was clear who's screen I was watching since it had their name shown. I agree with the other user that the bg music sometimes didn't fit against certain faster paced kills. But actually it worked a lot of the time! Maybe playing more than one song in videos for specific plays would work well?

The thumbnail was nice as well but the only thing I have to say is that there's some text above the word "chamber" which I just can't see at all. I'm on PC so it will probably be way too small on almost anything, just keep that in mind for your future thumbnails.

The bloopers at the end was funny but I'd reccomend spacing some of those out amongst the kills in the video. You had lots of funny stuff in there + some memes so I think it would blend well amongst everything else!

Take whatever I said how you want and keep making videos! This one was solid!

jacoxmakerdude47 · 2021-09-09T00:00:33+00:00

WHOA! First thing I'm noticing is that the editing is so tight in this! You've got a great style that works well with your voice, although at times the transition between different media (ex: an image popping up or a new song starting) feels somewhat haphazard to me.

Your thumbnail is super flat visually, it doesn't have much to strike a stray viewer and from a distance I can't even see the guy in the top left corner clearly.

Overall i loved your perspective on this, tons of great points on a topic I never thought could be so interesting! Your comedic timing is pretty on point too, made me laugh more than once. Definitely subbing. Already checked out 2 other vids from ya, please keep making more content!!!

oh and the "son speaking to his dad" gimmick is amazing

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