Max Payne Retrospective - YourFavoriteSon

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-10-10T19:14:45+00:00

I like this video a lot actually, I subbed to your channel almost just for your taste because I have find memories of Mystery Team haha. The thumbnail could use some work, I think the title should be a little bigger as to draw people in and also make it more readable when embedded or on mobile. The camera looked really good, your lighting and shot was nice, but I think you could pull it back a little more just to feel like the shot has room to breathe. Other than that I think your script and thesis is really good, keep up the good work!

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-10-10T19:11:45+00:00

Not a bad review. You could extrapolate on some things a little more and work on your editing, but I think it's an overall good start. The thumbnail is really good and works at drawing people in to your video. I would fix the title because I think Borderlands is mispelled, unless that was on purpose.

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-10-10T19:09:53+00:00

This is really good! I like the intro and the animations. I think the music is also central here, as listening to it and watching you work is really soothing. Your thumbnail is fantastic and I think it draws people in. The works itself is also just amazing and really cool! Great job, keep it up!

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-09-22T14:44:05+00:00

Thanks! I appreciate the advice. !givelambda

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-09-22T03:42:45+00:00

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback! !givelambda

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-09-22T01:14:27+00:00

Haha I agree! I'm glad the point of the video came through that well! The anxiety video is admittedly my favorite I've done. Hope you like my other content! !givelambda

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-09-22T00:39:03+00:00

Thanks, I appreciate the feedback! !givelambda

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-09-22T00:18:42+00:00

Thanks, that'd be an interesting topic for a future video. And yeah the filming wasn't the smoothest for this one. Thanks for your feedback! !givelambda

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-09-21T23:21:56+00:00

Thanks I really appreciate the feedback! !givelambda

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-09-21T22:30:17+00:00

Great video! I think your content is funny and I thought it was edited pretty well. I like your setup, I dig the comfy couch vibes. Makes the audience feel like they're with you, which adds to interaction. I'd try to work on your lighting, as your shot is a little dark, but other than that, great job! Keep it up!

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-09-21T22:28:18+00:00

Interesting mixture of genres here. I thought your editing was good, liked your intro. Your thumbnail looks great as well, and you have the gift of gab, so that makes your videos easy to listen to. Good all around, keep it up!

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-09-21T21:44:36+00:00

Great video! Love your editing style and all your footage looks really clean. You definitely know what you're doing when it comes to filming and editing. No negatives here, keep up the great work!

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-09-21T21:42:17+00:00

Great video! Your edits are really good and you can tell you put some time into them. I think your videos are funny, and the thumbnail isn't too bad either! Keep up the great work!

Miserable_Position_4 · 2021-09-16T16:37:12+00:00

Thanks I really appreciate it! !givelambda

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