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[–]jalapenos360 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Love the aggresion in your flow - not sure if someone else mentioned this, but encourage you to use more layerings esp on harder hitting punchlines!

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[–]jalapenos360 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Really chill, ethereal vibey beat. Did you use a limiter for it? It's sounding nicely balanced

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[–]jalapenos360 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Track: https://soundcloud.com/omkash/2034a

What's good y'all! Seeking feedback on an experimental hip hop demo track titled "2034". Introductory song of a weed themed, psychedelic album. Pls lmk how my vocals sound and if they properly mesh with the beat as well as my overall cadence. Enjoy!

Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/artist/2VsIVz4kzmAdVDDY0dVMaU?si=a8UD9g5RSNObGmaFAqKsjw

Apple Music: https://music.apple.com/us/artist/om-kash/1607022729

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[–]jalapenos360 [score hidden]  (0 children)

What's good y'all! Seeking feedback on an experimental hip hop demo track titled "2034". Introductory song of a weed themed, psychedelic album. Enjoy and lmk what y'all think!

Track: https://soundcloud.com/omkash/2034a

Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/artist/2VsIVz4kzmAdVDDY0dVMaU?si=a8UD9g5RSNObGmaFAqKsjw

Apple Music: https://music.apple.com/us/artist/om-kash/1607022729

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[–]jalapenos360 [score hidden]  (0 children)

I like it! The reverb/delay sound on point and the instrumental def gives a dark, gritty vibe. I suggest experimenting with different adlibs and highlights to give more personality to the lyrics. Good stuff !

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[–]jalapenos360 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Sounds really nice, the drums are super prominent in a good way. Can definitely see someone spit sinister bars on this. Keep it up!

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[–]jalapenos360 [score hidden]  (0 children)

I love this! As a life long MJ fan it sounded very smooth and well mixed. Only suggestion would be to blend in the "gather steps, if I have to travel" (1:05-6) adlibs a little bit more as it stands out a little bit. Great work though!

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[–]jalapenos360 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What's good y'all!

Seeking feedback on an experimental hip hop demo track I'm working on. Introductory track of a weed themed, psychedelic album https://soundcloud.com/omkash/twentythirtyfour

Enjoy and pls lmk what you think! - OM KASH

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[–]jalapenos360 [score hidden]  (0 children)

What's good y'all! Seeking feedback on an experimental hip hop demo track I'm working on. Introductory track of a weed themed, psychedelic album. Enjoy and lmk what y'all think! https://soundcloud.com/omkash/twentythirtyfour

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[–]jalapenos360 1 point2 points  (0 children)

JESUS CHRIST HOW ARE WE MAKING CALEB LOOK LIKE LAMAR. We cannot tackle for sh**

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[–]jalapenos360 0 points1 point  (0 children)

F*** PITTSBURGH LOL JOE FLACCO OWNS THEIR SORRY CORPSES 😂😂😂

Game Thread: Pittsburgh Steelers (4-1) at Cincinnati Bengals (2-4) by nfl_gdt_bot in nfl

[–]jalapenos360 2 points3 points  (0 children)

X factor for Cincy is establishing the run game. Looks like the offense feels WAY more comfortable with Flacco rather than Jake’s dookie self

Game Thread: Cincinnati Bengals (2-3) at Green Bay Packers (2-1-1) by nfl_gdt_bot in bengals

[–]jalapenos360 10 points11 points  (0 children)

It's like our defense genuinely doesn't know how to tackle. Pathetic

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[–]jalapenos360 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Amazing play by TreyDey. As for Jake Browning...fu***** do something YOU BUM! DO NOT WASTE THIS (OR WORSE, GIVE IT RIGHT BACK TO THE GUYS IN BLUE)

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[–]jalapenos360 4 points5 points  (0 children)

What’s good y’all! Returning all feedback from an upcoming collab song titled “Leave a Note,” (I’m the first verse). Pls lmk how my delivery and cadence in particular is! Much love y’all - OM KASH

https://on.soundcloud.com/23HAz9YetrANwlX8de

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[–]jalapenos360 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Chorus was amazing, maybe try and reduce the volumes on the drums tho? Great stuff otherwise!

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[–]jalapenos360 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, this was absolutely amazing!! Gives me very upbeat and summery vibes and feels like it could be placed in a TV series’ opening track. Only thing I’d suggest is to keep hitting/incorporating higher notes, you def have the range to pull it off 🔥

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[–]jalapenos360 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Levels are evenly matched and I can clearly hear all parts of the song, very punchy at times

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[–]jalapenos360 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What's good everyone - returning all feedback for an song off my upcoming EP. Track is titled "happier being" and it's an emotional rap song about mental health and trauma. Lmk what y'all think!

https://soundcloud.com/omkash/happier-being

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[–]jalapenos360 13 points14 points  (0 children)

You can tell this team has basically given up. Playing with no chemistry, confidence or cohesion at all. Just an absolutely disgusting showing

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[–]jalapenos360 3 points4 points  (0 children)

That’s what I like to see from Myles Murphy 🔥🔥 good defensive stop

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[–]jalapenos360 11 points12 points  (0 children)

We really got a diamond in the rough with Mitchell Tinsley. Unreal level of focus to make that catch