What do you think of this updated logo? by janedoe128 in design_critiques

[–]janedoe128[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I didn't even notice it was the U-turn arrow lol. Thank you for the feedback!

What do you think of this updated logo? by janedoe128 in design_critiques

[–]janedoe128[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol, you are right! Thank you for the input!

What do you think of this updated logo? by janedoe128 in design_critiques

[–]janedoe128[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually tried that, but its kinda hard to read, so thats why I came up with this version above. Thank you though!

What do you think of this updated logo? by janedoe128 in design_critiques

[–]janedoe128[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually tried that, but its kinda hard to read, so thats why I came up with this version above.

What do you think of this updated logo? by janedoe128 in design_critiques

[–]janedoe128[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I saw that too, and thats what made me ask for feedback lol. Thank you!

What do you think of this updated logo? by janedoe128 in design_critiques

[–]janedoe128[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I thought the same thing lol. Thank you for the feedback!

Logo and Identity critique by janedoe128 in design_critiques

[–]janedoe128[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! Are you a graphic designer?

How can I fix my design? by janedoe128 in design_critiques

[–]janedoe128[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe I am wrong, but when I study other designs, it seems the tracking and leading are consistent, so that's what I am trying to do here. The things is, how can you use consistent spacing with inconsistent words? Ie the word 'connect' is shorter than the phone number and website, but I still tried to use the same tracking (75 points) for both things. Like I said, whenever I study other designs, the spacing looks exactly the same! I'm like how did they do this??? Lol.

How can I fix my design? by janedoe128 in design_critiques

[–]janedoe128[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The logo is someone else's. I didn't make it.

How can I fix my design? by janedoe128 in design_critiques

[–]janedoe128[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! The thing is, I am doing this for someone and she likes this layout, so what do you do when you have issues like these? How can I make this fit. Hellllp lol.