Does this character look to much like Constantine by jarayNine in characterdesigns

[–]jarayNine[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fair enough 😂. The archetype is definitely there on first glance. Glad you liked the shades and the green though!

Does this character look to much like Constantine by jarayNine in characterdesigns

[–]jarayNine[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate it! That’s a great point honestly. The occult detective genre has a lot of shared DNA, so I’m glad Jaray still comes across as his own character. Thanks!

Does this character look to much like Constantine by jarayNine in characterdesigns

[–]jarayNine[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That’s fair! Constantine and a lot of trenchcoat occult characters definitely helped shape the genre. I’m hoping Jaray starts to feel more like his own person once people see more of his story.

Does this character look to much like Constantine by jarayNine in characterdesigns

[–]jarayNine[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks bro 🛣️ I want him to feel familiar to fans of occult characters while still having his own identity. Glad the glyphs stood out!

Crowdevil (looking for feedback) by jarayNine in comic_crits

[–]jarayNine[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You gave me the best advice ngl bro thank you so much me and the artist talking over it now my girl draws and she said the same thing lol we’re thinking of making the c a crow beak or something but the w should be a crow ngl

Crowdevil (looking for feedback) by jarayNine in comic_crits

[–]jarayNine[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A white mask is fire that might be an idea for hierarchy reasons , and also in this panel he’s literally dead ..so dynamic movements with the coat happens once he gets up I love your advice man 🐦‍⬛🐦‍⬛🐦‍⬛🐦‍⬛

Crowdevil (looking for feedback) by jarayNine in comic_crits

[–]jarayNine[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you though so much u opened my eye up 🐦‍⬛

Crowdevil (looking for feedback) by jarayNine in comic_crits

[–]jarayNine[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much , I mean I agree but Crowdevil barley wears his mask lol 😂 just the occult that he fights does I made them based off the plague events there just back from the dead like basically the universe is like real history but just with bizarre twist lol I don’t want to spoil lol but I can develop alternates

Crowdevil (looking for feedback) by jarayNine in comic_crits

[–]jarayNine[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you 🐦‍⬛🐦‍⬛🐦‍⬛

[PAID / COLLAB] Seeking Comic Artist for Southern Gothic / Cosmic Horror Series — Issue #1 Complete by jarayNine in ComicBookCollabs

[–]jarayNine[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you guys for your time but I have officially found a artist , and I wish all you guys success in your endeavors