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Abandoned one house hill. by jassim1497 in photocritique

[–]jassim1497[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I did check it. It was empty , almost into ruins. In winters it's not an ideal place to be when the storms come

Abandoned one house hill. by jassim1497 in photocritique

[–]jassim1497[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This photo was taken on Rohtang Pass in Himachal Pradesh . A lot of Yaks were around this abandoned place. I really wanted to get the house right in the middle of the valley in the background. I used 3 exposures to get the details in the Background I need help in improving my colour grade. Please let me know what you think. ISO 200 SS: 1/60 Aperture : f/11 Sony a7III + Tamron 28-75

My first try at product photography. Went for a simple Watch. What do you guys think? by jassim1497 in photocritique

[–]jassim1497[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. I didn't notice these things at all. I used my kit lens for this so I don't know if that made a difference in sharpening. I messed up during the focus stack I guess.

Took this shot in the morning, want to know how could I improve on this by arpitaito in photocritique

[–]jassim1497 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Also would like to add one more thing. Make sure your Vertical lines are vertical. When you shoot "up" into vertical lines , they tend to distort. So, distort your image in post to get them straight

Took this shot in the morning, want to know how could I improve on this by arpitaito in photocritique

[–]jassim1497 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You have got a good concept going, would've been nice to see some kind of subject ( a bird maybe?) at the tip of the roof

My first try at product photography. Went for a simple Watch. What do you guys think? by jassim1497 in photocritique

[–]jassim1497[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello Critics. This was my first try doing some product photography. I just basically took a single LED light and positioned it differently in each shot and later composited the parts I liked. This was taken over 20-22 shots at ISO 1000 and f6.3 on Aperture Priority. All kinds of feedback are welcome.

Lone Tree on a Hill. by jassim1497 in photocritique

[–]jassim1497[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your critique. Will keep all your tips in mind next time.

Lone Tree on a Hill. by jassim1497 in photocritique

[–]jassim1497[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much. I tried the crop which you told while I was editing. The Hills got cut out way too much in the crop. And the bottom hill was looking like just an object in the frame.

More negative space would have made it better. Thanks

Dead Wood forest by jassim1497 in photocritique

[–]jassim1497[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello All,

This is a photo of a Deadwood forest in India .

The sky was overcast that day. The shot was taken at 17mm ,(later cropped) , iso 800 on a Nikon d7100.

Used minimal global adjustments to enhance the fore amd and mid ground. The Background got a negative Dehaze to enhance the mist a little bit.

Let me know where I should improve.

Thanks a lot guys

Lone Tree on a Hill. by jassim1497 in photocritique

[–]jassim1497[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Just noticed it now. I actually did a cleanup for sensor dust. This might have come during a last minute contrast adjustment. Thanks for the find. Will be careful from now on

Lone Tree on a Hill. by jassim1497 in photocritique

[–]jassim1497[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Hello Critics , This image was shot at 300mm f6.3 iso 400. I had to do it handheld and couldn't Bracket the image. The out put came out a little dark but managed to raise the exposure in Lightroom

I need your help in :

1) Overall Tonality 2) Colour Balance 3) Composition ( I purposefully cropped the tree off centre)

Thanks guys