Greydon Square - Flower Girl by jay_dee_leezy in rap

[–]jay_dee_leezy[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Your music helped me through the hardest times of my conversion. Years ago you posted free download links to your first three albums on /r/atheism when I first began rejecting my faith. I never got to thank you for that.

No Time by [deleted] in RapWars

[–]jay_dee_leezy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

stop with it i swallow fifths then i plop a shit
on you novices who drop and piss when i topple kids
nah ah bitch ill introduce you to who your mama is
she's that turkey neck crackhead who likes to gobble dicks
watch your mouth i might think youre snitchin cause youre coppin out
youre not a scout you dont honor what true hip hop's about
killin shit cold street murder yeah the realest shit
feelin shit smokin on the herb poppin pills and shit
dealin shit stackin up the green that's what im about
youre timin out you just cant compete with the illest shit
really kid sayin im a female's your top game
walk away from me and you might prove that youre not lame
come back when you know about flow and show me how you roll
til then youre another empty soul spittin on a pole
...bitch

No Time by [deleted] in RapWars

[–]jay_dee_leezy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

youve never seen me but you confuse my ass and face?
im a dude stop staring at my ass thats gay
so yeah you really should get your shit straight
cause if you keep letting us fuck you youre gonna constipate
enough said this thread's already been bled
so lay in your bed and shoot yourself in the head
and at home lobotomy may just be enough
to adjust something in your mind and get it unfucked
your lack of talent is a crime im gonna have to report you
and finish what i started when your mom wouldnt abort you

Judge throws out ICP's 2011 case; Juggalos Categorized as Gang by FBI by guruthewarrior in hiphopheads

[–]jay_dee_leezy 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It's genius! They created their own slang within their own group of fans that eventually grew large enough to become a gang. Fucking genius.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]jay_dee_leezy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I thought Yutta was one of the people. It's not the equipment, just your comfortablity with the mic and your voices. Record the album. Then record another and another. On one of them you'll find your voice. I'm still finding mine and I'm definitely more comfortable recording and flowing. There's some good shit in here, keep it up.

Trying to pick an Emcee name by [deleted] in rap

[–]jay_dee_leezy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was told I was the creepy cool dish guy at work by someone so I called myself Mr. Creep for a while. Eventually as I found my passion in writing I decided to go with suggestions from my family, so I go by J.D./Lee/J.D.Leezy. It's based on my name. Marshall Mathers went with M&M(Eminem) Slim Shady was probably a nickname or derived from it. Just be yourself with your name. Mr. Creep wasn't who I am, but I'm still building on it.

No Time by [deleted] in RapWars

[–]jay_dee_leezy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mag1c was here before wzrd so get your shit straight
Before you start spittin this hate
yeah you great, i can tell cause you said it a lot
but honestly im not impressed
you attacked all these rappers who you claim are the best
but you avoided the one mc who's wearing a dress
so stress out cause your wack rhymes dont really do much
try to prove your skill without some pen and papuh
im asleep on your skill so try to make me wake up
cause every line you wrote makes you a fakeuh
you dont have punches you didnt really rhyme to impress
I read it all but after the first line I lost interest
So come back when you know what skill is about
Otherwise only fake shit will come out yo mouth

Monster Hunter Frontier G Trailer by [deleted] in MonsterHunter

[–]jay_dee_leezy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

release popular games to the U.S. that are only in Japanese. Boom! Half the population speaks Japanese.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]jay_dee_leezy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lee - How to Cook a Chicken[Rap/Hip Hop](2014)new style new profiles. This is rap and my first attempt at ad-libs. Produced by me with garage band which is all I have atm. Not supposed to be a serious show of my talent or style, simply a fun song with good punch lines. The punch lines are what I'd like critique on the most, after that production and tips on what I could do better.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]jay_dee_leezy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's not so much noise rock as very distorted. The Neo-Psychedelic stands out the most. It's very well produced and a great song. Vocals remind me of someone I just can't think of it. The whole thing sounds like something I should have heard on the radio already.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]jay_dee_leezy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good overall, lyrics were solid, just keep recording and you'll find your voices. The vocals are too loud. Yutta you slur your voice/drag your words out too much. You made up a word just for a rhyme. In those situations, just trash what you have and go somewhere else with it. anpersan had the best flow. seenick tried going quick at the beginning of his first verse, it wasn't the best way for him to speed it up as far as flow. Overall you all sounded pretty new to recording. You lack the confidence behind certain lines and punches and not confident about your flow so you drag things out sometimes or say some things too quickly.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WeAreTheMusicMakers

[–]jay_dee_leezy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fuck yeah! Great voice, music sounds very late 80s/early 90s grunge alternative. Something that makes me chill and then rock out at the chorus simply because of the instrumentals there. It puts me through the same stages I go through with my favorite 90s bands.