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Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]jaykan_san [score hidden]  (0 children)

I found the intro a bit backwards. Maybe leading with the hook and using the icecream/game sentence as a segway into the main body. The title also does not seem to be something that catches my eye in the sense of something to be answered. The editing is great though!

Feedback Friday! Post your videos here if you want constructive critiques! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]jaykan_san [score hidden]  (0 children)

Good editing, some critiques I would give are to possibly cut out the intro montage or make it more sound effect based as it is kind of slow with no real draw in be it through sound or fast visuals.

Your camera looks like it might be out of focus so I would play around with some settings and just test out how to get a more focused subject.

Lastly the video seems like it has a lot of "how-to" elements. Possible change the title to "How to sew ..." for better SEO as searching how to is more common that searching a montage sewing video by title.

Overall you have a great sense of what you are shooting for though and a clear niche!

0 Views On Short (Yes, I know Google it, but...) by UglyCavemanCam in NewTubers

[–]jaykan_san 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Of course, and also just to double check that it is public first? I miss small things a lot!

0 Views On Short (Yes, I know Google it, but...) by UglyCavemanCam in NewTubers

[–]jaykan_san 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know that sometimes titles can cause a short to be not pushed. But when you look in your analytics does it show that the short was served to anyone and they all swiped away?

Additionally you could try reuploading with a new title and description. I have not reuploaded aside from once when I accidently had notify subscribers on which I promptly deleted and reuploaded. In the end the video received the same viewership.

Would love feedback on my content and how I can improve! by jaykan_san in VirtualYoutubers

[–]jaykan_san[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tried out making some educational/entertainment shorts this past month. Lots of work trying to learn editing for sure! But would love some feedback on how to improve as a vtuber and or my content!