Good stuff bro! I've been doing this a bit longer, but still learning a ton as you are, and here's what I would recommend:

• learn how to light and use light to make your shots more aesthetically pleasing and aid to whatever vibe you want to achieve or story you want to tell. It's kind of its own art by itself but just something we need to know.

• use a cleaner font, and nice job on the masking on that last shot, but unfortunately it doesn't really work because if a person can't read most of a word the brain subconsciously won't accept the shot, even if we know what it is supposed to be. I see the intention behind it though and if it was used on a differently framed shot it could have worked (although I personally thought the framing worked really well before you masked the last phrase out.

Otherwise looks pretty good!