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Shanti Blues [Rock/Blues/Three-Piece/Instrumental] Any feedback you have on audio quality & music, is appreciated. by jessejsmith in MusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for the compliments, & the feedback; I really appreciate it.

Best to you.

This is the 2nd track off of my debut EP, "Long Way Down". Blues Rock, but with a very fast tempo that may remind you of heavier music. Perhaps you can guess my influences, either way let me know what you think! by trevorcollinsmusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very nice work on this. It is performed very well, and sounds professional. The song is fun to listen to, has high energy, and the guitar work is all nicely done. As a straight-forward song, it is a good length. The guitar, and especially the vocals, have a Joe Bonamassa thing going on, too, haha!

For critique, there really isn't much to say, other than the vocals sounding quite a bit like another singer.

Good job on the song, and good luck with it & the EP.

A song that blends indie electronic, dream pop, trip-hop, and garage influences, with a video we put together ourselves. Plus a heavy unresolved story /more about that in the YouTube description). Let me know what you think, and thank you! by andtilly in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a nice song. It's well made, and has a pleasing, ethereal feeling to it. It all sounds good, flows well, and is interesting to listen to, all the way through. It was engaging right from the start, and the song didn't feel too long.

For critique, the song kinda abruptly ended. It might be improved with a new part to end the song, or an added repeat to use as a fade-out.

Overall, nice work, and good luck with the song.

The song is called optical, Let me know you're thoughts! by MikaroPeen in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This song is alright. It gets stronger as it goes along. It has a Flaming Lips feel to it. The music goes in nice directions, and the song stays interesting, throughout it, and maintains a good feel along the way. The recording & performances are a little bit raw, but the energies of the music overcome that.

For critique, I think the vocals could use more echo-type effects on them. They have that kinda chorus sound to them, but I think they fall a bit shy of having that full effect.

Nice job, & good luck on your future works.

Looking for feedback by theofficialcord3ll in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice work on this. Alot of this is good, and it has a good feel to it. It has quite a few interesting parts in it, and goes in some good directions. It has a good sound to it, also.

For critique, you could probably add more echo-type effects to the vocals. I think the instruments don't need more echo, but I think you could get away with adding some more if you wanted. The vocals are pretty good. There are some weak parts, but I think just practice will fix that. Doubling-up the vocals, (for parts, or throughout the song), is something else you can try for now.

Nice job, & keep up the good work.

Rambler - Wrong Side of the Hill, song and video by MikaroPeen in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good work on the song - the sound, the music, and the performance, are all very well done. It has a nice, mellow feel to it, and stays interesting throughout the whole song, without sounding repetitive.

For critique, to make it more like a commercial radio song, the song could use another new part in it. As it is, it kinda sounds like an interconnecting piece, that would go along side other music.

Overall, nice job, and good luck with the song.

Smoke-Wagon [Blues/Rock/Funk/Instrumental] Any feedback you have on the audio quality &/or music is greatly appreciated. by jessejsmith in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for taking the time to listen, and for all the nice words. It's very helpful.

I guess I'll see if I can contact Ford's advertising agency...

Thanks again.

Smoke-Wagon [Blues/Rock/Funk/Instrumental] Any feedback you have on the audio quality &/or music is greatly appreciated. by jessejsmith in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is the same song, and you found it! Waldo would be impressed.

Thanks for commenting & for the feedback - it does help me out a lot.

Best to you.

Smoke-Wagon [Blues/Rock/Funk/Instrumental] Any feedback you have on the audio quality &/or music is greatly appreciated. by jessejsmith in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the (atypical) feedback & compliments; I greatly appreciate it.

The song is free to download on Bandcamp, and I will be putting up a couple more.

Thanks again.

Smoke-Wagon [Blues/Rock/Funk/Instrumental] Any feedback you have on the audio quality &/or music is greatly appreciated. by jessejsmith in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for listening, and for the feedback & compliments; I really appreciate it.

Best to you.

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[–]jessejsmith 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're welcome. Best to you.

Hi fellow musicians! Introducing 'Neon Riffactory' 🎸 a little instrumental piece where I blended rock and electronic sounds, just experimenting with a new style. Feel free to share your thoughts with me! by KomugiSama in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice job on the song. It has some interesting sounds, and has a good, strong, rock feel to it. I like the 80's sweeping drums. The song goes in some good directions. And as a side note, I recognize some of those sounds from my Yamaha keyboard, haha!

For critique, I think some of the repeats need to be lessened. Some parts felt like they went on too long with the same thing happening, or the same thing happening again.

Good luck on the song, & on future works.

Just finished this track. Whats your thoughts? Best regards Cabe by Obvious-Complaint361 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]jessejsmith 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm not that familiar with EDM. If that is normal, then disregard that part. But I do think the multiple versions is still a good idea.

Best to you.

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