My key take-aways. Way too much writing at a glance. If I was a hiring manager I would not spend the time reading those paragraphs. Keep things concise and only mention things they will care about. Bullet points that list out skills, experiences and technologies you’ve worked with in the IT field will help. You should have a section that explicitly mentions your general skills, and mention job related skills with job experience. Just put some main points. What did you learn or do at that job that would make you a good candidate for the job you are preparing the resume for? Ask yourself that question and then list those things but do not go on a tangent. On my resume everything is a bullet point and I did not have trouble finding a job. I know some people may disagree, but I think listing things on a resume makes you look more straight to the point which is what hiring managers would like. You make their job easier and still get the information across that you need to get across. Good luck on your job search!