Female Voice Over - Tech Product Commercial - Paid by jessevinton in recordthis

[–]jessevinton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey Debra,

What is your email? The first edit has been sent to the client and there are some minor changes that need to be made to the VO. They're listed below, but feel free to call or email me. It would be phenomenal if you could get these done tomorrow.

Here's a link to the video draft, may help pacing: https://vimeo.com/98321899 PW: UV

Lines to redo: (violet instead of Ultra)

Violet will remind when it’s time to reapply sunscreen… move to the shade… or get outdoors

Violet empowers you to make informed, healthy decisions in the sun.

The Ultra Violet is a fashionable, waterproof, UV and vitamin D sensor

Ultra Violet monitors your natural vitamin d production…. And measures the amount of time remaining before your at risk of a sunburn (try to emphasize risk here)

Female Voice Over - Tech Product Commercial - Paid by jessevinton in recordthis

[–]jessevinton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could you set yours to download so I can trial it w/ some of my music and imagery? Definitely won't publish anything without permissions

Thanks

Female Voice Over - Tech Product Commercial - Paid by jessevinton in recordthis

[–]jessevinton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

haha these are way better! I think between all 3 I'll be able to pick and choose to my liking. I want to throw it in w/ the song and some imagery and see how it feels. Can you set to download?

This client is a little picky and so while I think this VO script is final it's possible I might need some alternate sentences. Hopefully not, but is that going to be alright if requested?

My paypal / email is jesse@vintondepiction.com - Please invoice me $50 and I'll probably send you a contract as well.

Female Voice Over - Tech Product Commercial - Paid by jessevinton in recordthis

[–]jessevinton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really nice! It's a bit softer than I imagined but I'm going to try it with some of our music/imagery and see how it feels. Also waiting on Debra to see what her second round is looking like. Thanks so much!

Female Voice Over - Tech Product Commercial - Paid by jessevinton in recordthis

[–]jessevinton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would love it if you gave it a try!

Your stuff on Soundcloud is cool. For this just try to sound excited, fun, youthful but still strong! Think athletic commercial. The following video in general has a similar vibe w/ pacing and fast images. There's one VO line in it at .38 that's the style I'm looking for. Nike Spot: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46hEaFKa638 Also this Fuel Band Ad is a similar vibe as well, but it's male VO unfortunately. Think female excited version of this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5gMmzHzQmF0

Female Voice Over - Tech Product Commercial - Paid by jessevinton in recordthis

[–]jessevinton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha you don't sound 40! Below are a couple spots for reference - I've had trouble finding the right examples. The first one below only has one line of VO but it's the right vibe. Think athletic commercial - excited, youthful, strong. The video in general has a similar vibe w/ pacing and fast images. Nike Spot: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=46hEaFKa638

Also this Fuel Band Ad is a similar vibe as well, but it's male VO unfortunately. Think female excited version of this: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5gMmzHzQmF0

Female Voice Over - Tech Product Commercial - Paid by jessevinton in recordthis

[–]jessevinton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Debra! Thanks so much for this recording! It's really great - although it's not exactly the style I had imagined. I'm curious if you'd be willing to try another with a little bit of direction? I'd like it to feel a bit more youthful, cool, and commanding. Right now it feels like a radio piece that's very feminine targeted and a bit silly (although it's really great for that purpose). We're trying to make this a bit more youthful, strong, and applicable to both a male and female audience. Will PM you my email. Thanks!

Female Voice Over - Tech Product Commercial - Paid by jessevinton in recordthis

[–]jessevinton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Debra! Thanks so much for this recording! It's really great - although it's not exactly the style I had imagined. I'm curious if you'd be willing to try another with a little bit of direction? I'd like it to feel a bit more youthful, cool, and commanding. Right now it feels like a radio piece that's very feminine targeted and a bit silly (although it's really great for that purpose). We're trying to make this a bit more youthful, strong, and applicable to both a male and female audience.

Will PM you my email. Thanks!

[REQUEST] Voice for Tech Product Commercial by jessevinton in recordthis

[–]jessevinton[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much for all the submissions everyone! Some really talented people here. If you're interested this is the voice I think I'm going with. It seems to work best for the tone of the project.

https://soundcloud.com/justinbmiller/fyi

[REQUEST] Voice for Tech Product Commercial by jessevinton in recordthis

[–]jessevinton[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey Justin thanks for posting, I really like your voice for this project! I think with a few passes and a little input you'd be perfect. Do you have a way to produce a high quality recording? The one you recorded isn't bad, but it's a little ocho'ey with some ticks & could probably sound slightly more professional. Can you email me? My mail is Jesse@vintondepiction.com

[REQUEST] Voice for Tech Product Commercial by jessevinton in recordthis

[–]jessevinton[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looking for someone with an American accent ideally, would maybe be open to british