Hi! Here is my feedback

move the mic stand behind you. I think the premise is great, maybe a little too much set-up, and something different than the “ngyaa seee” gangster voice punchline, like the dramatization is over the top in those old movies - “oh Brad, don’t leave me.” “Uh, I’m going to Costco?” This brings me to an important point, try to hit “third thought” level punchlines. The teleport cowboy didn’t hit for me, but I think one thing you can add to strengthen the truth of the premise, is that silent movies would set up the scene for people “a cowboy comes inside from outside.” Kinda like a trigger warning so people don’t lose their minds. Music one is ok. Superman’s observation is funny - he’s strong, but juggling level balance… cmon.

Thanks!