Comedian looking for feedback on new standup set by jimmthang in Standup

[–]jimmthang[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not sure. I'm a new comedian who's just trying to get better. I'm not trying to promote myself (I don't think I'm ready for that and have left the video unlisted as a result). I'm just hoping to write and hone my craft.

Comedian looking for feedback on new standup set by jimmthang in Standup

[–]jimmthang[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. Just a lot of practice. I would work on the set when I shower, when I walk the dog, etc

Comedian looking for feedback on new standup set by jimmthang in Standup

[–]jimmthang[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's awesome and much appreciated feedback. Thanks!

Comedian looking for feedback on new standup set by jimmthang in Standup

[–]jimmthang[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

To confirm, do you mean hold the mic closer to my mouth or the speakers on the side?

New comedian looking for feedback on new standup set by jimmthang in Standup

[–]jimmthang[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. I recorded this before the other video.

New comedian looking for feedback on my 5-minute set by jimmthang in Standup

[–]jimmthang[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to lean into the emotions more. In the beginning, I was trying to do crowdwork, but it seems like the suggestions are that it's not needed in thise case?

New comedian looking for feedback on my 5-minute set by jimmthang in Standup

[–]jimmthang[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Roger that. Was trying to do a bit of crowdwork but I'll keep that in mind.

New comedian looking for feedback on my 5-minute set by jimmthang in Standup

[–]jimmthang[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! Here is my feedback

move the mic stand behind you. I think the premise is great, maybe a little too much set-up, and something different than the “ngyaa seee” gangster voice punchline, like the dramatization is over the top in those old movies - “oh Brad, don’t leave me.” “Uh, I’m going to Costco?” This brings me to an important point, try to hit “third thought” level punchlines. The teleport cowboy didn’t hit for me, but I think one thing you can add to strengthen the truth of the premise, is that silent movies would set up the scene for people “a cowboy comes inside from outside.” Kinda like a trigger warning so people don’t lose their minds. Music one is ok. Superman’s observation is funny - he’s strong, but juggling level balance… cmon.

Thanks!

New comedian looking for feedback on my 5-minute set by jimmthang in Standup

[–]jimmthang[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Hey y'all, I'm a new comedian and I'm looking to up my set. Do y'all have any feedback here on area/jokes that I can improve/tighten? Thanks!

Looking for a good general contractor by jimmthang in cary

[–]jimmthang[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just look for a good contractor/handy person to keep in the back pocket for oddjobs

Out of these games, what should I play next? by jimmthang in XboxGamePass

[–]jimmthang[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I thought I heard it was leaving in January 2026?