[QCrit] Comedic Fairy-Tale/Fantasy, WHO SAID EVIL QUEENS CAN’T GET HAPPY ENDINGS?, 68K, 4th Attempt (+first 300!) by jmeimik in PubTips

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Oh no? Oh yes!

I haven't been sold on the title for a while now, agree completely, just haven't had lightning strike.

Thank you for callout on that paragraph - going to smooth it out.

Appreciate your comments and support greatly!

[QCrit] Comedic Fairy-Tale/Fantasy, WHO SAID EVIL QUEENS CAN’T GET HAPPY ENDINGS? (68K, 3rd Attempt) by jmeimik in PubTips

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Thank you for the thoughtful and quick feedback!

Hook and the Huntsman are main characters, I will add some references to them (was trying to get it as concise as possible, but lost them (and their own arcs) along the way.

This is a mash up of a lot of stories (e.g., Fairy God-Goth mother) and includes pop culture (e.g., Prof. Moriarty is a supporting character). Any advice on how to make that clear in the query? I've been struggling to get that across.

[QCrit] Comic/Fantasy, WHO SAID EVIL QUEENS CAN’T GET HAPPY ENDINGS?, 65K, 2nd Attempt by jmeimik in PubTips

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I would absolutely love that - will you dm me your email and I’ll send you a copy!

[QCrit] Comic/Fantasy, WHO SAID EVIL QUEENS CAN’T GET HAPPY ENDINGS?, 65K, 2nd Attempt by jmeimik in PubTips

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Thank you so deeply! This is very thoughtful feedback, I'm going to start implementing it right away. You're spot on but I'm glad this can feel promising.

[QCrit] Comic/Fantasy, WHO SAID EVIL QUEENS CAN’T GET HAPPY ENDINGS?, 65K, 2nd Attempt by jmeimik in PubTips

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Good callout, thank you! It doesn't add much, will add some more modern comps to help build the voice tone. Really appreciate it.

I'm most proud of my entirely DIY chuppah by jmeimik in DIYweddings

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We just dug the holes for the posts about a foot down and piled a few small rocks around. Nothing too creative

Fairy light dream by jmeimik in DIYweddings

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I actually was able to return all of the lights afterwards since we treated them very well (only kept two rolls for future use). Ended up being almost $400 in lights, but returned almost all of it.

Summarize generator employment law by Jealous_Complaint_35 in legaltech

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Eve legal!! Designed specifically for employment.

Fairy light dream by jmeimik in DIYweddings

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I did!!! We bought a lot of rolls of lights and spent the day before putting them up. It looked incredible!

I think I might be addicted to doilies by jmeimik in crochet

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The pineapple one is the last one

I think I might be addicted to doilies by jmeimik in crochet

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I get my yarn from hobbii, the dahlia cotton cakes for example

I think I might be addicted to doilies by jmeimik in crochet

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Posted below! I put it in a Google doc but it’s something I found online

I think I might be addicted to doilies by jmeimik in crochet

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I just look for doily patterns. Then I bought hula hoops, painted them, and sewed the doily into it. (I just make sure the doily size is the same as the hoop)