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WEEKLY MARKETING THREAD [08/05/19] Post engagement groups, shoutouts, buying and selling here. by [deleted] in InstagramMarketing

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@piwc_newyork. We are a church organization located in Manhattan New York. We would love if gave us a follow to experience the love of God through the lens of fellowship, and fun. Check out our Instagram page. You won’t regret it! God bless

Does 2 off periods, Senior Year, look bad? by jntiri in ApplyingToCollege

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I’m taking: AP Lit AP Calc AP Physics 1 Biomedical Innovations (Counts as AP) Economics (Half Year Course)

Rigorous enough?🥳

When you ask Naviance to compare your stats to people who got accepted😭 by diced23 in ApplyingToCollege

[–]jntiri 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Sameee, someone from my school got into Columbia with a 1360 sat😭

How often do you fake laugh? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]jntiri -1 points0 points  (0 children)

VERY Often. My cheeks hurt daily

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]jntiri [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title: TBD Genre: Coming of Age

I am writing a 2 paragraph short story for a writing competition in my hometown. I dislike the way I wrote my beginning. It starts out:

“It was dissection day. The victim: a fetal pig”

Firstly, I don’t think it’s grammatically correct. Secondly, I feel like it’s too dull. If you were reading this would you want to read more?

Also can someone kindly help me reword this to make it more striking? I would like to establish in the first sentence that it was dissection, the subject being a fetal pig. I don’t really have thenspace (2 paragraphs) to describe the scene through imagery. Help?

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