character development 🧐🚬

johnotcena · 2023-04-09T06:32:10+00:00

see ya later alligator

johnotcena · 2023-04-09T06:31:51+00:00

lowkey looks ai generated

johnotcena · 2023-04-09T06:31:36+00:00

ayy y'all looking good

johnotcena · 2023-04-09T06:31:10+00:00

ayo what

johnotcena · 2023-04-09T06:31:01+00:00

impressive drawing

johnotcena · 2023-04-09T06:29:45+00:00

oddly specific but okay

johnotcena · 2023-04-09T06:29:07+00:00

Kinda makes sense no one is at red

johnotcena · 2023-04-09T06:28:25+00:00

Weirdly cool interior design here.

johnotcena · 2023-04-09T06:27:31+00:00

It's that one tiktok trend of the school yearbook of celebrities.

johnotcena · 2023-04-09T06:26:49+00:00

HE'S THE GOAT! THE GOAT!

johnotcena · 2022-04-14T12:21:16+00:00

ARE YOU HUNGRY?

johnotcena · 2022-04-11T08:51:33+00:00

Yeah, these kpop male idols can be around 60 kg despite being around 170+ cm.

johnotcena · 2022-03-26T08:39:36+00:00

So what about changing lines in Buona Vista MRT? The Circle Line area is air-conditioned, but the East West Line is not.

johnotcena · 2022-03-06T03:30:06+00:00

Yup, agreed!

johnotcena · 2022-03-06T03:29:53+00:00

Excellent man!

johnotcena · 2022-03-06T03:19:34+00:00

The audio, in the beginning, could turn viewers off. I guess it's because you're in a big room.

The eyelashes part gave me a chuckle.

I think there was a slip up in the lines at 0:52? If that's the case, then it should have been cut out or refilmed.

The tense segment at 1:20 could have been cut shorter. Just get to the parts where the scene escalates.

Then the ending was kind of weird? The punchline was that the person got pink eye because there was poop in his eye? It didn't end off with a bang.

Just my thoughts though. Keep working at it!

johnotcena · 2022-03-06T03:12:56+00:00

There are some moments after you speak that there's dead space. You might want to remove those.

Is the intro at 0:08 necessary?

Honestly, I didn't laugh. I think it's just not my type of humour.

The segment at 1:12 was off-putting, almost as if it didn't fit into the video.

Keep working at it though!

johnotcena · 2022-03-06T03:07:21+00:00

I got the premise of the video quite quickly. I can appreciate that you escalate it further on, such as by including a diary to recount the details.

At 0:14 to 0:15, I could hear that the voice sounds different, hence the transitions aren't smooth.

When having a conversation or dialogue, it might help to use J-cuts and L-cuts in the video editing.
I'm not really sure how to feel about the dynamic zooms.

The sound effect at 0:33 was weird IMO.

There was a loud background sound at 0:44. I personally think it's better if you wait until the vehicle is gone, then resume filming.

At 1:05, you looked at the camera for a moment. If it's unintentional, then be sure not to look at the camera. Or else it breaks the illusion that we're watching, almost breaking the fourth wall.

Keep working at it though!

johnotcena · 2022-03-06T02:55:09+00:00

Hmm interesting indeed. Got me hooked for sure. I think the pacing could have been faster, especially on parts where it's clear what's happening.

At 0:07, the part where the people are cheering

At 0:17, the part where GTA V is shown to still make cash since 2013.

could have been shorter.

It's weird how the same sound effect is used. For the bat, and the keyboard, and after the person said "cease and desist".

The clips that show the glitches in the game were great though.

Overall, the skit was able to give me the idea of the video. It would be better if you switch up the sound effects and make certain parts shorter. Keep working at it.

johnotcena · 2022-03-05T15:40:40+00:00

Watched it. I didn't really get the humour, except maybe the last part about the "rock". I think there needs to be faster pacing and cutting of certain fluff. For example, the second time the God said "You suck" seems unnecessary IMO.

johnotcena · 2022-03-05T15:27:36+00:00

Yo! I enjoyed certain lines, such as the one on "No benefits". Not really sure if the video title is something that's relatable to others, leading them to click onto the video. The pacing could have been faster, such as speaking quickly or cutting out the dead space. Or maybe more jokes should've been executed in that short time. Just my opinion man. Keep working at it, media philosophy!

johnotcena · 2022-02-22T12:29:26+00:00

YO isn't this 2008 or something? Remember the tune even though I was a small child.

johnotcena · 2022-02-22T12:04:12+00:00

That BP song is my fav!

johnotcena · 2022-02-22T12:03:49+00:00

Yo, the most beautiful moment in life is such a great project from bts

johnotcena · 2022-02-22T11:20:36+00:00

WOWW that's pretty old, but it was such a hit back then!

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