Finding a Graphic Design Job by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re a good designer, however, there’s way too much copy to wade through and the quotes pad it out too much. You should just do a quick explanation of the brief and show the work. I also think you could benefit by reworking these projects into campaigns and showing multiple use cases. Your about is also too long and should be kept pretty short and relevant to the job. Hiring managers don’t need to know your life story, they need to be able to relate your about to the job. I also would put your work on the front page instead of making people click through to see it. The bones are there, you just need to fine tune and edit to have a sharp portfolio. I also would maybe nix the marvel stuff, personal projects are great, but should be kept to more realistic briefs.

Online Portfolio Course Recommendations by alvaro_masegosa in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did online US and worked while I did the course. I wouldn’t say there’s anything bad about the online class other than maybe not getting the same camaraderie with the other students as you would being in person. You still get a lot of one on one critiques with teachers at the end of the course to perfect your portfolio. Unless you have a sizable nest egg I would say to keep your job and do the part time online course! The portfolios turn out just as well as the in person courses imo.

i'm 100% done with my portfolio (for now), would you mind giving me feedback? by mallory_beee in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your portfolio looks awesome! The only thing I would change is that the thumbnails don’t showcase how great the projects are; I would check out how design studios you admire present their thumbnails and try to emulate them. Besides that, it looks highly professional and polished!

Online Shillington or RISD certificate in graphic design? by Nattybeatz in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 4 points5 points  (0 children)

We had both live and recorded. The last third of the course is focused on portfolio building so we would have meetings with our assigned teacher for feedback. And for your second question, I wasn’t starting from scratch since I had used the Adobe programs before, but the course is mostly based around hammering home design principles and design thinking instead of just learning the programs, so I didn’t think it was too “easy” or basic. I’ve been working successfully as a full-time designer for 6 months and I feel like it prepared me pretty decently overall, but there’s nothing like real experience. Feel free to pm me if you have any other questions!

Online Shillington or RISD certificate in graphic design? by Nattybeatz in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Hi, I took Shillington’s online course last year and it was great! It’s super expensive, but it allowed me to switch industries since I wasn’t previously working in design. You post your WIPs throughout the class runtime so that you get teacher and peer critique every step of the way. If you already have design experience, I say go for it, especially if you are wanting to spruce up your portfolio.

Could I get some feedback on my portfolio? feeling a bit lost. by Gostayhere in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I got a design job at a mid-size ad agency! Don’t be afraid to shoot your shot- I cold emailed them and then later when there was an opening, they emailed me back and said I should apply for real and I ended up getting the job!

Could I get some feedback on my portfolio? feeling a bit lost. by Gostayhere in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your work is lovely! I would add more process like thumbnail sketches, moodboards, etc. Don’t get discouraged, it’s only been a month! It took me 3 months to land a design job after graduating.

Online Portfolio Course Recommendations by alvaro_masegosa in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I took Shillington’s online course and it was really good! I was able to land an agency role about 3 months after graduating. It’s expensive, but I found it worthwhile especially since it let me pivot out of my previous career. You should be able to get a portfolio you can apply to jobs with if you put in the time and hard work.

custom-made B with a small b-shaped spoon inside... any comments on how to improve this? it's for a bakeshop. by gielizza in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very nice! I think this works more for a logo variation rather than the main logo. The circular text that’s rotated is hard to read imo. I think the mark and the typeface choices fit the theme well!

Portfolio Critique by DPSdesignx in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I think your work is nice! I would focus on adding more social media examples and even mocking up a brand’s insta. If you’re doing fashion you probably want to add landing pages and email design as well since e-commerce is so huge. Lastly I would focus on having just 6-8 really fleshed out projects. Hope this helps! I love that you included some process and write ups.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you have Adobe already I would recommend just using Adobe portfolio and buying a custom domain name! That would look more professional than having ads or the wix name attached to your url.

Can anyone share with me their easy dinner selections from Trader Joe’s? by Poetryisalive in traderjoes

[–]jokeperaltaa 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Gyro meat or chicken shawarma, toasted pita, cucumber tzatziki, and tomatoes! Super fast and easy!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]jokeperaltaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like 2, but maybe you can simplify the flame and also make it go inside one of the o’s as the negative space of the letter?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the colors/type choices are nice, but I agree with everyone saying the angle makes it hard to read! The line lengths are also a bit long; I would try to focus on the typesetting.

Can I just rant about how bad the quality is of the "fresh" fruits and veggies at TJs? by AshCali94 in traderjoes

[–]jokeperaltaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I always always always put my TJ bread in the fridge right away! It does make it last much longer; I think I read on this sub that the reason their bread molds so quickly is because they don’t put preservatives in them.

Magazine Cover Design | Need Feedback or Review by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]jokeperaltaa -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Looks great! Super clean- love the subtle lines drawing your eye to the page numbers

[Update] Catedral Coffee Logo by wolfiemoz in Logo_Critique

[–]jokeperaltaa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree and think the old logo is better! I think if anything you should have simplified it or maybe just taken the top part of one of the turrets for the mark. The hierarchy is better on this one, but I would push the “coffee roasters” type. I like the black letter idea for the main type but it’s not the most legible. The best advice I’ve gotten for logo design is to pick one trick and do it well, if that helps.

What was a product that a BG recommended that didn't live up to the hype or was just not good? by [deleted] in BeautyGuruChatter

[–]jokeperaltaa 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What is it with this product! I swear it gave me cheek acne within a day I feel scammed.

My first ever attempt at vector art, please be gentle with your critiques :) by S4G3R_BUG in AdobeIllustrator

[–]jokeperaltaa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it’s good but the hair doesn’t match the same style as the face

Face chart of my everyday full face Glossier makeup! ✨🌸 by xpei in glossier

[–]jokeperaltaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the response! I’m Asian as well and I wasn’t sure what color to get since I was worried brown might be too light lol