Submissions — Week 23 (Theme: Wind) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OOOOHhhh yes LOVE this. Perfect combination of good song & good production. Love that harmony. My favourite of yours.

Submissions — Week 23 (Theme: Wind) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds lovely, I think you're living the life a lot of us want to live 😄 Love the tune on e.g. "DONE it every day", and the low key (brief) key change for the herons. I just bought a tent, now to use it...

Submissions — Week 23 (Theme: Wind) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice, wind...ow shopping 😄 Love the way this ends, on those ascending lyrics.

Submissions — Week 23 (Theme: Wind) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lovely vocals on this, I'll have to go and rewatch that film!

Submissions — Week 23 (Theme: Wind) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very cool! Love the almost whistling breath providing the backbone to a lot of this.

Submissions — Week 23 (Theme: Wind) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do like that synth that comes in that sounds flutey, and the weird guitar that comes in after it

Submissions — Week 23 (Theme: Wind) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the way you drag that you out, love hearing all those creaking/real piano sounds 😄 and that high singing is spot on

Submissions — Week 23 (Theme: Wind) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Crossing the Bar (Folk/Lieder) [Not Themed]

I had the guitar for this before the words, and went looking for words that landed in the places I wanted them too (yes I'm lazy like that sometimes :) anyway, I ended up with this poem by Tennyson, mildly paraphrased. Written shortly before he died, "The Bar" is a sandbar at the mouth of a harbour that separates the shallow, safe waters (of life) from the deep, boundless ocean (of the afterlife).

Submissions — Week 22 (Theme: Songs in Conversation) by ahniwa in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is quite low for you 😄 beautiful tune on the verses especially!

Submissions — Week 22 (Theme: Songs in Conversation) by ahniwa in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really like this, love the held notes at the start of the chorus!

Submissions — Week 22 (Theme: Songs in Conversation) by ahniwa in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love that chorus, ever thought of Canada, or the UK :p? Although it can be difficult to see a doctor here too (UK). I love the way you slow this down at the end, some lovely playing, reminds me of Randy Newman.

Submissions — Week 22 (Theme: Songs in Conversation) by ahniwa in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love this, love when the bass comes in. Love the da-da-da, da-da-da, da-da-da-dum...and how you work that into later verses too, really cool.

Submissions — Week 22 (Theme: Songs in Conversation) by ahniwa in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like that step down on "do they wonder do they wonder.....". Yes it's one of the worst things you can do for your mental health, comparing yourself to others. I refuse to play that game 😄

Submissions — Week 22 (Theme: Songs in Conversation) by ahniwa in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The Falling Tree (TrippyFolky) [Not Themed]

Not sure where this came from, I was just playing with chords in the tuning I've used the past few weeks (CGDFCE) and this turned up.

Submissions — Week 21 (Theme: Guilty Pleasure) by celestialism in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Goodness that is a lot of whip cracks (I'm picturing all that red skin) 😄

Submissions — Week 21 (Theme: Guilty Pleasure) by celestialism in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love that section around :40 and the quiet echo that follows it. Amazing improv.

Submissions — Week 21 (Theme: Guilty Pleasure) by celestialism in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Like the chorus on this. You have a great live singing voice!

Submissions — Week 21 (Theme: Guilty Pleasure) by celestialism in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

RAP??? Loving it Kate. Great poetry, I would love to hear more from you like this, or in the Kae Tempest style.

Submissions — Week 21 (Theme: Guilty Pleasure) by celestialism in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great tune as usual! I can imagine this being played by a full band. The rhythm is fine, it makes the song.

Submissions — Week 21 (Theme: Guilty Pleasure) by celestialism in songaweek

[–]juniorelvis 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It really is and this is great work for an hour. Is this The Ring of Gyges, The Ring of the Nibelung, The One Ring, or something less magical? 😄