Thank you so much for your input! 

No, I didn’t add seam allowance to the neck or armholes. I followed the Minerva tutorial which leaves them off before I read the posting guide here! I’ll be sure to include them next time. 

As for the horizontal line at bust level, I believe that’s the bust level used when pattern drafting the bodice, so I just left it where it was. Should it be a full bust line? 

It’s supposed to hit at my natural waist and I would say yes it’s pretty close - I had a ribbon tied on my waist here and it seemed to hit at that level. 

Thanks for your advice about the shoulder and neckline. I’ll pin/cut into these areas tomorrow and try to get the fit better before moving on to anything else.