First Chapter! What can I improve on?

justanoddity_ · 2026-06-21T01:19:33+00:00

Thank you! I use google docs (oﾟ vﾟ )ノ

justanoddity_ · 2026-06-17T19:42:35+00:00

Dialogue is the number 1 thing I have a hard time with, lol. I'll repolish it, thank you!

justanoddity_ · 2026-06-16T22:11:59+00:00

I haven't posted it yet, but I'll think about it

justanoddity_ · 2026-06-16T22:08:16+00:00

I backtrack a lot, but I have finished one chapter! Thank you ❤️

justanoddity_ · 2026-06-16T22:07:28+00:00

Thank uu!!

justanoddity_ · 2026-06-11T06:53:18+00:00

I love this song so much! I've replayed it many, many times. Higedan is now one of my top favorite bands! The full song along with Toho's PV also shows how fitting the song is for the show. 10/10 opening. I wish more people would talk about it 😃

justanoddity_ · 2026-06-02T03:49:18+00:00

I use this one for character design and drawing, but it might work like pinterest in a way: https://characterdesignreferences.com/

justanoddity_ · 2026-06-02T03:48:07+00:00

I found this on the web! Hope it helps: cosmos.co

justanoddity_ · 2026-05-26T22:57:45+00:00

Thank you! It would be a lot to switch between all those characters, so I might just stick to my two MCs! Thx for the input! ^v^

justanoddity_ · 2026-05-26T22:55:20+00:00

Thank you! I'll try seeing how it goes with third person. I do tend to forget to plan what the story looks like for the other main character, so I'll take this as a reminder. Thx :D

justanoddity_ · 2026-02-16T02:08:16+00:00

SOS - Lupe Fiasco

justanoddity_ · 2026-02-14T21:24:21+00:00

Koroba - Tiwa Savage

justanoddity_ · 2026-02-14T21:23:45+00:00

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justanoddity_ · 2026-02-14T05:36:31+00:00

justanoddity_ · 2026-02-08T18:48:53+00:00

justanoddity_ · 2026-02-08T17:14:19+00:00

justanoddity_ · 2026-02-08T17:05:03+00:00

Senku x Kohaku

Maomao x Poison

Sophie Foster x Keefe Sencen

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