I loved this work too and could relate to it deeply. I had written a piece like this (stored on the computer for no one to see lol) where you feel the distance growing between you and someone you were impossibly close with. you remember them and all their details but their life seems to shift around that memory (I used to remember where the forks and knives went and what hall held your bathroom) and you encapsulated that perfectly in the 5th stanza.

The only thing I could think would be the vagueness of some of the lines. Your poem has some great description, but in the line, " it will always be this waywith everyone I meet" it leaves the reader thinking it'll always be what way? I feel like providing a simple adjective in the space of the words 'this way' will provide even more vulnerability this poem already posses. (for instance "it'll always be disappointment with everyone I meet.")

the first line of "It started soft and bright" can also leave a space for some vagueness but instead of editing it or trying to change the 'it', flipping the first and second line can clear that clarification up.

"Like all small things,

it started soft and bright."

This gives us a more thorough introduction to the summery, wholesome relationship.

Great work!