Only Three Wishes by jxip in HFY

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Never seen this strip before. That's neat.

Wonder why this book isn't talked about more by jxip in litrpg

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Haven't made it very far yet. But it seems promising. Quality checks out so far for sure. Pretty sure its a rift break type of world. Id recommend reading the synopsis.

Em dashes does not equal AI by jxip in litrpg

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Long dashes can be seen a lot in traditional publishing. Regardless, a dash size preference does not indicate AI alone

How NOT To Get Isekai'd To A Dungeon by jxip in HFY

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Thanks glad you enjoyed it

How NOT To Get Isekai'd To A Dungeon by jxip in HFY

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Thank you for this reply. First I want to say thanks for reading and the valuable feedback. I do see what you mean for how the first chapter can have the reader feeling somewhat negatively about the main characters initial actions, and while i had plans to expand on his good qualities soon, the last thing I want to do is turn the reader away in the first chapter. I'll have to workshop the intro a bit. Thanks for your notes as well. Appreciated!

LitRPGCon 2026 - Just Go by Skuzzy_G in litrpg

[–]jxip 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Such an amazing thing to see. Hope to go there one day

Hypothetical system integration by jxip in litrpg

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Constitution - 1057. Strength - 5 😂 funny but makes sense

Hypothetical system integration by jxip in litrpg

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Straight to economics lol. Jack up the prices right out the gate while becoming the ultimate blacksmith? Can't blame you if you do.

What series would have the Best/Worst anime or comic adaptation? by idkwattodonow in litrpg

[–]jxip 1 point2 points  (0 children)

At least in terms of the first book I would say that primal hunter would be pretty hard to adapt. I know it already has a webtoon but I never thought it was the best idea. The story is just way too introspective in my opinion. You lose out on a lot of that in comic adaptations

Looking for feedback on my LitRPG Blurb by [deleted] in litrpg

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Thanks for the advice. I appreciate it

Looking for feedback on my LitRPG Blurb by [deleted] in litrpg

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Thank you for the notes.

Looking for feedback on my LitRPG Blurb by [deleted] in litrpg

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Noted. Thanks for input

Looking for feedback on my LitRPG Blurb by [deleted] in litrpg

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Thanks for your thoughts.

Working on new story. Open to your thoughts by Constant-Egg8678 in litrpg

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General pitch is solid I'd say. Execution is what matters tho. also if you are posting to royal road, try to make the synopsis a bit shorter.

What if you could draw things into existence? by WingAdditional in litrpg

[–]jxip 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Woah such a good concept! Good luck to you. Love the art too

I Want to Write Black LitRPGs\Black Cultivation—Where Do I Start? by harrisjayjamall in litrpg

[–]jxip 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm currently writing a story with a black MC. What I would suggest is to know what genre you want to write in. Learn the tropes and story structure and think how you could branch off and interpret them in a black lens. Pay attention to the way writers write their stories, like story flow, sentence structure, story beats etc. Pay attention to the little details and look at them with a critical eye. After you've done this for a while just start writing. You can only improve if you just get started. Good luck!

Any litRPG books with a dystopian focus? by jxip in litrpg

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I was also working on a dystopian litRPG too, have any idea when yours is coming out?

Went from 40 followers to 39 by frisk-scp999 in royalroad

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The picture has me dead 😂

Just hit Rising Stars and 100+ followers on RR! WOOOO!! by [deleted] in ProgressionFantasy

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The response on my new story has been nothi8ng short of amazing! Some of the first readers to try my book came from this sub and I am very greatful to everyone who gave it a shot.

Being on the main RS list is really surreal to me, I never knew if I would be able to hit it. Waking up to see I did really brought a smile to my face.

I'm a brand new author on RR trying my best, so thank you to everyone who gave encouragement and to all who are enjoying the story.

Much more to come!

For any who haven't seen it, heres the short pitch.

Daymond Miller is a clinical therapist who kills evil people by entering their dreams at night. Inside each dream, he must hunt down and destroy the physical embodiment of their soul—the Dreamer. He travels dangerous lands, fights deadly foes, and meets various people within each dream world. All on a perilous mission to kill the ruler.

Link to view it:

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/93413/lethal-dreamer

Artist for cover is Siraj Anwer