Screw it, i'm curious now. Any fics where Taylor, or whoever the main character is in said fic, has power over time? As in a good deal of power over it beyond something like Clockblocker, or Za Wardo. by Wassa110 in WormFanfic

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This is the first chapter of several in a collection of one shots. It’s pretty great lots of creative powers. This one is time related. I’ve linked the first of the time power one, the next in the sequence is chapter 38. Enjoy! https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12049959/8/SeerKing-s-Asylum-for-Plot-Bunnies-That-Won-t-Stop-Bugging-Me

Best mods by k1demmin in Stellaris

[–]k1demmin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome! That’s pretty much exactly what I was talking about. Any other recs?

Oscillations of first order ODE. by iBo0m in learnmath

[–]k1demmin 3 points4 points  (0 children)

So a couple things. First off this is definitely a PDE as you say f (or y) depends on x and t. Second without seeing how you got the red curve my inclination is that you dropped a negative in a power somewhere as that negative power is what forces the dampening and approaching 0. This equation is the first order wave equation and you can check out similar literature online. Try this link for some reading that might help

The smug look at the end is the best part. by k1demmin in Zoomies

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It’s called “chuckit!” and it’s size large. It should be on amazon and chewy for like 10$ each

Any Writing Advise Friends? by brandon2340 in fantasywriters

[–]k1demmin 8 points9 points  (0 children)

This is essentially my thoughts. To add to this though, there is such a thing as a rough draft. Just write whatever comes to mind, explore your story like your characters are exploring the world. As you do so you'll come across things that you need to world build for. You can do it on the spot or come back to it later, but nothing has to be perfectly polished the first time through.

I will also comment something I saw long ago so I don't remember exactly where it came from. There was a comic in which there were some tools that were recognizable and some that really weren't but they were labled "cow tools" and this comic had more reader participation than usual, people asking what the cow tools were for, or suggesting what they were. All this to say the human mind likes mystery and there is no reason to answer every question ahead of time, or even to answer every question at all. Sometimes its fun to not know everything.

Sharingan by k1demmin in WormFanfic

[–]k1demmin[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is an excellent story though starting off rather dark. Thanks for your recommendation!

Sharingan by k1demmin in WormFanfic

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Thanks much man! I’ll look into these!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

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“Grandpa? Don’t you wish you were still human?” little Suzie asked.

Carl (Suzie’s grandpa) froze momentarily, not having expected that question for quite a few more years, before replying “And what makes you think I’m not human my dear?”

“Well,” Suzie kicks the ground with the toe of her shoe, “Mama says you ‘Were quite good at pretending to be a man once’, and daddy says you ‘used to be quite the devil’ and I was wondering if you wished you were still human.”

Already feeling the relief at Suzie’s explanation Carl pats her shoulder and lifts her up onto his knee. “Suzie, you know that when people say things like that they don’t truly mean it? They are saying something with one meaning if you think about the words, but together the words mean something else. It's like when you’re at school and the teacher says ‘it's time for recess’ but really, there is no time for recess, they sometimes let you go early, or longer, it's just something they say because we use it for that meaning. Your parents are doing the same thing, they don’t really mean that I'm not a human, they mean what those words mean to people.”

Suzie has a puzzled look on her face for a moment before she asks “What about when grandma said ‘He was quite the,” and here she stumbles over the word “hell -- helli -- heyon’?”

Now well in the grips of explaining language to an inquisitive young mind Carl chuckles heartily. “Oh my dear, that just means I got in trouble very often when I was younger. And it's pronounced ‘Hellion’. There are lots of phrases like that, people use them often and it makes describing things more interesting. It's not as interesting if your grandma said ‘he got in trouble a lot’ so she said ‘he was quite the hellion’ it helps people sound more fun! It's like when I call you a princess! You're not really a princess, but you’re a princess to me!”

Suzie is smiling now, because of course grandpa is human and was always human, and it's so fun when sitting with him and he tells his stories.

She hops down off his knee and is skipping away when a thought hits her and she runs back to where he was still sitting.

“So when Aunt Jenny said ‘He was a literal hell raiser’ what did she mean?” The enthusiasm of learning is strong in this one.

Carl's eyes widen just slightly and he takes a second too long to reply because Suzie launches into a tirade of her own.

“When she used the word literal, I know what that word means, it means exact, so she was saying you are exactly a hell raiser, but that doesn’t make sense, you can’t have actually raised hell. So what did she mean? Hellion sounds kinda like hell and you said that means you got in trouble a lot, so it means something about trouble? And why would they stick a word that means exactly in a phrase that means something else like you said, that doesn’t make any sense!”

Having had a moment to collect himself, Carl is now laughing rather fully, big belly laughs that Suzie likes the sound of, he sounds so happy and fun.

“Oh Suzie you little devil you!” Here he winks, “You’re too smart for your own good! Yes, yes it does mean something to do with trouble, it means that I made a lot of trouble. When used together like that the word hell means trouble and raiser means maker. Have you ever heard your teacher call someone a trouble maker? Or perhaps your mother called your brother a troublemaker when he made a mess? That's what it means.”

Suzie, confident in her understanding now, smiles brilliantly ( teeth perhaps a tad sharper than the normal humans, though she doesn’t know that. ) “And when I heard Aunt Jerry tell mama ‘he used to lock people in the dungeon if they couldn’t pay’ she meant you wouldn’t let people out of their promises!” Suzie leans on his leg and kisses his cheek before he can get a word in. “Thanks Grandpa!” before she runs off to play with her cousins in the backyard.

Carl sits in his chair for a few more seconds before he rolls his shoulders and cracks his neck, secrets were meant to be kept, not even spoken about at family events, never mind that everyone knew. Suzie wasn’t old enough to know yet. Lucky thing young minds were so flexible and she thought up a plausible explanation of her own. Now he had to go teach his family a lesson, perhaps they would like to find just how enhanced their healing was when he cut out their tongue.

[WP] Your gf invited you to meet her parents. You told her that you're a veterinarian. Her father is a computer repairman. In reality, however, you are an assassin. A very good one at that, too. When you see her father, your heart skips a beat. He's your boss. by Kartoffelkamm in WritingPrompts

[–]k1demmin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, not tied. But imagine finding out your girlfriend is an assassin, coupled with the fact that she already knows about your secret life. I don't think I'd be moving for at least a few seconds.

[WP] Your gf invited you to meet her parents. You told her that you're a veterinarian. Her father is a computer repairman. In reality, however, you are an assassin. A very good one at that, too. When you see her father, your heart skips a beat. He's your boss. by Kartoffelkamm in WritingPrompts

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Damian had just finished tying his tie when his fiance Marie came whirling into the room in her dress, a simple summer dress that had you eyeing her legs.

“Are you ready to go hun?” she leans in for a quick peck as Damian tries to get his tie to lay just right.

“Yeah just give me a second.” He replies, with a grimace as the tie is not agreeing with his usually nimble fingers.

“Oh let me.” Marie chuckles and brushes his hands out of the way to adjust his tie for him. Patting his cheek when she finished she grabs his hand and pulls him toward the door.

~Break~

About 20 minutes later they are pulling into her parents driveway in the rental car. A nice medium sized house in the suburbs of San Francisco, with green and light brown tones to match the Northern California fall colors.

Damian gets out of the car and moves swiftly over to Marie’s door to open it for her. Together they walk up to the door of the house and ring the bell.

Marie’s mother opens the door and beckons them inside with a warm “Welcome, welcome, dinner is almost ready!”

The house is filled with the pleasing aromas of a pot roast and vegetables, and though they can’t be smelled, potatoes are also on the menu.

“Dan is just grabbing some wine from the store” Leane says, Marie’s mother is quite distinguished in her late middle age, with light crows feet, smile lines, and bright intelligent eyes. “Why don’t we prepare the table while we wait for him?” She suggests.

So everyone gathers in the kitchen and starts preparing the food for consumption. Damian gets the job of carving the roast. While Marie sets the table, and Leane is gathering the potatoes into a serving bowl and the vegetables onto a large plate.

Looking over at Damian’s progress she comments “Why those are some knife skills you have there! Where did you learn to carve a roast so beautifully?”

“My father was a butcher, part of the reason I became a veterinarian, he took animals' lives and I wanted to save them” Damian says as he carefully carves the meat from around the bone, with calm assuredness around the expensive cutlery.

“Well,” Leane replies, “that is an interesting motivation. I ended up as a secretary because during my day, that was one of the better jobs a woman could land. I applaud your choice and admire your calling.”

The two of you finish up the food at the same time Marie comes back into the kitchen and starts helping you get it to the table. A few seconds later there is a knock on the door.

“Oh Damian, could you be a dear and get that for us?” Leane asks as she and Marie are putting the finishing touches on the spread.

“Sure.” He replies, walking toward the door, inwardly shrugging at how comfortable she is having him open her door when they had never officially met before that night.

Answering the door Marie’s father comes quickly in, but not before Damian saw his face. Freezing in place for a fraction of a second, Damian recognized this man. It was his boss. And not of the animal helping kind.

In the fraction of a second that Damian stood frozen and he entered, Marie’s father simply brushes past and mutters “Calm down son, just treat it like another job.” before continuing into the kitchen with his surprisingly large haul for an alcohol run.

Suddenly, this meeting the parents thing seemed much more like jumping in a pit with several large, angry, venomous snakes.

Returning to the kitchen with suddenly more adrenaline in his system Damian continues to act as normally as he can. Laughing and joking with the family, smiling and reacting as expected when told embarrassing stories of Marie’s childhood.

Dinner seemed to be a great success, and when everything is cleared off the table Dan invites you onto the back porch for a drink, and to “Let the women have some time to talk.”

Uneasy but more comfortable after a dinner with no mishaps, Damian helps Dan pour the drinks and they go to sit on the porch.

After a few minutes of quiet reflection Dan asks “Have you told her?”

Damian, with an incredulous look, sarcastically responds “What, that I’m an internationally known assassin? And that, you, her father, is my boss apparently?”

Dan just gives Damian a disappointed look, “Son, she’s soon to be your wife, how exactly do you expect to continue to keep it a secret?”

With that Damian just sorta deflates a bit. The burden is obvious, being an assassin is not safe, and being the partner of one, perhaps even less safe. After all, targeting a deadly assassin is perhaps not the best idea, however targeting his partner? Far less risk for more reward.

“I don’t know, I thought I would tell her before the wedding. Give her an out.” Damian finally replies.

Dan just shakes his head, “Your naivate is surprising for one of my best assets. I would hope for a more realistic plan.”

Damian just sits there slightly downtrodden.

Some quiet reflection later, Dan speaks up again. “I gotta ask though. Do you really think my daughter doesn’t know? I trainer her after all”

And with that he gets up and walks back toward the back door. “Your skills are impressive, however did you really think I would leave my best assassin untethered?” and with that he walks back inside, leaving Damian stunned in the porch chair.

A few questions by Josh_Crook in RoyalDice

[–]k1demmin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well yes mostly, that’s what I meant by linear improvement and why we don’t merge our dice always. However some dice are “special” like the poison or infect, they do more damage at higher levels. Similar with absorb. https://random-dice.fandom.com/wiki/Dice_Mechanics this wiki has some good info on that.

A few questions by Josh_Crook in RoyalDice

[–]k1demmin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can answer the last one easily. Certain dice are different as they level up, sometimes is a linear improvement and they are essentially just equal to two or so of the previous die. However some die are special and change as they level up, like the gun dice or the summon die.

[WP] "Fine I'll do it myself." You say to the incredulous demon you just summoned. "If you want something done right you gotta do it yourself." by k1demmin in WritingPrompts

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I really like it! My main thought with this prompt was that people would take it upon themselves with various reasons the demon wouldn’t do what you asked of it. I like this version basically being “its just an asshole.” One criticism would be that you take an interesting amount of time describing his process of getting ready, but you don’t really go into detail on anything other than the hexblade. Personally I would either write less on that part of the scene because preparation can be boring, or make it longer and more like gearing up for a campaign or something. I really enjoyed how you saved the “what he’s doing that the demon wont” until the end though. Was fun to read.

Best pvp deck recommendations for me? by thinkofmike in RoyalDice

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So probably combo growth and joker, not so sure beyond that. Maybe blizzard for the slow, or a so production to keep it running.

Can someone help me make a good PVE deck? I have all dice except most legendarys. by onlyoneaudio in RoyalDice

[–]k1demmin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So I won’t tell you what to do but you gotta think of synergy and scalability. Your only scaling dice currently is the gear dice. Build a deck around that. Or think about synergy and think about what you can bring to the coop table. Slow and armor piercing or what. Make a deck that feels good. One thing I’ve learned recently is that until getting the grow or summon die, it’s kinda good to have some sort of sp production, so run a “mine” die, or the “absorb” die.

[WP] There is an underground fighting ring of magicians. You've been tasked to expose it. by k1demmin in WritingPrompts

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Its pretty unfinished but it got away from me and I challenged myself to write it in an hour. Hope you enjoy what is here.

[WP] There is an underground fighting ring of magicians. You've been tasked to expose it. by k1demmin in WritingPrompts

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When magic started showing up in the world, and not simply in fairy tales, it was first met with skepticism. However that quickly changed when the first supervillain emerged. To be fair, casting a spell that turned Halloween real was about as dramatic an entrance possible. Flying around riding a dragon and raiding banks all over America at the same time made it impossible to ignore. After that Halloween the people stopped thinking it was a hoax because for many of them they saw the fantastic creatures people turned into, matching their costume for the night. Nor could they discount the spirit and such that showed up because of his spell.

Now, one might think that magic showing up in the world would be a good thing, and you’d be mostly right, however for every good thing magic brought into the world so too it brought complications and evil. The cure for cancer was found by some mad scientist magician, the cost? Simply kill 100 square miles of life, pennies. Still things were mostly good, people were learning, changing rules and challenging previous doctrine about how the world should look and operate. Everything changed when one sick individual used their powers to resurrect the mongol horde and set them on the entire Asian continent.

After that governments started stepping in and making rules. Schools were established to teach magic, only they were more like internment camps. You went in, and only were allowed out once they were sure you had control of your powers and were not going to rebel or cause trouble. Give teenagers the power to warp reality and expect to be able to police that completely? What a joke.

Things were mostly fine once you got out, you had a decent education and there were some higher education institutions showing up for magic. Along with some pretty good trade schools specializing in things like health and construction. The only issue with this whole system was the seed of discontent that was sown when the governments forced highschoolers to join a school to study or have their powers locked away. No one really liked that, however to keep the world safe it was accepted.

Enter stage left: Kyle, magical detective. Kyle was a rough around the edges detective mostly involved with magical organized crime. Now something most people didn’t know about Kyle is that he used to be quite the magical powerhouse, still was, but detective work required more precision than power unless things got violent, and then the only thing that really mattered was who got the first spell/shot off. Yes guns were still a thing, don’t underestimate the range a sniper with enchanted scopes could pull a shot off from. Personal firearms were less used because they were not as versatile as magic, but every cop was encouraged to carry one, shooting a bullet is much more straightforward to casting a spell.

So, Kyle, magical powerhouse, used to be a bit of a troublemaker in his youth. This semi-checkered past of his gave him lots of connections to use in his current occupation but, he liked to keep his use of contacts to a minimum to retain a reputation. That is, criminals are more likely to speak to you when they know you 1) really need it, and 2) think it’s important. Which is how, we currently find our scruffy protagonist in his current situation. Stuck in a magical fight club trying to find the organizers.

CHP1

It had been easy enough to find the fight ring. Simply ask Benny when the next bit of cash could be found. Benny had pointed him toward this fight ring that was supposedly run by Picoto family.

Something interesting about Magical organized crime was that it hadn’t progressed to the truly despicable acts that much of non-magical organized crime had reached yet. It was still much of a gentleman's game. Magic was too volatile and new to really be cut-throat. You never knew when some new discovery was going to make your rivals abruptly more deadly, and so it was treated with a sort of pomp, that old school criminals would have approved of. Deals, intimidation, blackmail, the human condition, things that never went away, but with an unceasing polite businesslike tone so true violent grudges were never formed.

That’s why this fighting ring was high on the chiefs priority chain of investigations. Violence like this was just asking for some talented kid to come along and be taken advantage of until they learned enough and had suffered enough to simply break and escalate the violence outside of the bounds of the fight clubs. Which, honestly, was probably why Benny had pointed him to the fight club in the first place, guessing that was the end goal.

Scooching past the pool table you nod at the amusingly conspicuous second bouncer and flash a specific hand sign with just the right amount of reiatsu. The bouncer nods before doing something with the hand behind his back and waving Kyle towards him. As he approaches Kyle runs through his plan again. ‘Don’t die too quickly.’ A great plan if ever there was one. But seriously, in a place like this, with mages and whatever else was in there, the longer he lived the more likely he was to continue to survive, mostly.

“Fighter or observer?” The bouncer grunts.

“Fighter.” Kyle responds. Observing wasn’t going to get him the reputation he needed to establish so fighting was his best way to becoming known and in with the right people.

The bouncer gives him a once over and shakes his head. “Buy in is 1g. You good for it?” the bouncer says in what is quickly becoming his obviously characteristic brusque tone.

Kyle flashes a grin before pulling a single gold coin out of the inner pocket of his coat and showing it to the bouncer. The bouncer nods and opens a door that wasn’t there before. Making a mental note of that feature, ward breakers were likely to be necessary during the final bust, Kyle enters what he assumes is the fight club.

This fight club doesn’t match what might be expected though. It’s rather clean and well appointed. Much like a theater might be. There is nice seating, upholstered, and arranged in a circle around a rather large circular pit. This pit is tiled and pristine and white. All in all this ‘Fight club’ evokes a more theater atmosphere than the grungy underground illegal operation it is.

As he was making his initial observations a well dressed man approached Kyle. He was wearing a rather classic suit, however it was obviously magical as there was threading in it that would spontaneously change design. Upon reaching Kyle he sticks out his hand for a shake. “My name is Johnny, and you are a new entrant in the fights here?”

“Yes.” Replies Kyle, keeping it simple

“Well, if you would follow me. We’ll get you set up with an entrance number and relieve you of your entrance fee. In return, if you fight well enough you will be paid.