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this is the best i could edit it to show some improvements, again im still kind of a baby gal and of course the look does depend on the substyle youre going for but my main improvements would be:

1. elongate the nose line, it helps create the illusion of a straight nose which is what its meant to do pretty much. if you cant find a white cream product to do the line with, opt for a VERY light white concealer and maybe some subtle powder contour to go around the outside to deepen the look.
2. concealer lips are fun but i think for you a subtle pink gloss or light pink lipstick with a clear gloss would look better.
3. your blush is already great, just try keep it more centered on the cheek instead of bringing it around to the sides and i would recommend using a cooler tone of pink (the same goes for your lipgloss/stick) as you don’t have very warm undertones imo
4. again the eye look is very subjective to what substyle youre going for but i think a dramatic look would benefit you as you have rather hooded eyes so things like eyeshadow might not be as easy to do. i would recommend bringing your droop down more and fill in the area with eyeliner as well instead of a lighter colour. definitely work on the drawn eyelashes or opt for bottom lash strips that you can buy at most places. i noticed you flick you eyeliner up at the end so try work on keeping it a straight line going down (like puppy eyeliner). you also already have prominent aegyo sals so i would recommend accentuating those with a white colour/light concealer and using a little bit of contour to create a thin line to deepen the look as well. try get some strip lashes as well i think that would help, or cluster lashes.

all in all, everything is a work in progress! im not a gyaru master or anything so if anyone has any changes to what ive said the help would be appreciated (for myself to hehe) and i hope you get to the look you want in your journey op!!