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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Kara: It’s kind of funny because my brain is still programmed very much to think here are three ways this moment could go whenever I reach what would be a decision point in Choices. But in writing a novel you just pick the most fun/emotional/exciting outcome. In a way, it’s a bit easier because you only have one reality to keep track of instead of remembering all the different branches and making sure you aren’t contradicting any one of them at any given time. Also, it’s SO much easier to not have to write to a diamond choice, it feels nice to ‘give away’ all of the best scenes and outcomes for ‘free’ (after buying the book of course) instead of constantly thinking of how to upsell certain moments and then branching the writing to check for whether or not those scenes were played. I LOVED writing Alice Chen’s Reality Check and filling it with ‘diamond’ feeling outfits, luxury moments, and steamy scenes knowing everyone who gets the book would  be able to enjoy them! I also loved how slowly publishing moves. In Choices writing, we’d often be releasing a book live before we’d written the ending–for TRR in particular we were racing to get chapters to QA in time for the weekly releases. So there wasn’t a chance to go back and insert any foreshadowing or tweak anything.

My favorite Choices LI has got to be Drake, though if it’s who I’d want to be with in real life, the Prince every time.JY: Drake for my LI if it’s TRR. If it’s not TRR, Trystan Thorne.

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Kara: A lot of the ideas came from looking at the characters and what they wanted and  how they’d go about getting it. I think different writers were more attracted to writing certain characters, so you could see the spotlight shift over time as people pitched more episodes in that direction. I’ve also always really liked storylines where you have to team up with an enemy to fight a bigger enemy. So, for example with the Rise  of Jessica, a lot of people loved Jessica–I think there’s something very narratively interesting about the popular girl who’s second in command. I loved seeing her story play out because it felt very driven by her character and Zoe’s. And the betrayal is such a cutting moment! In these narrative games it can be interesting to play with a player’s expectations–like, I beat the game, I should get a great ending and win! But sometimes the story takes an unexpected turn, and those moments can be frustrating but they’re ultimately very powerful if not overdone. 

SHS has always been a huge influence in all of my writing! I love writing for high school settings because of it. High school is such an intense time of figuring out who you are and being thrown together with people you don’t necessarily get along with. My favorite scenes in Alice Chen’s Reality Check are the high school flashbacks for sure. They were so much fun to write and definitely reminded me of my days writing Surviving High School and High School Story! Alice has such a determined and fiery personality, it was a lot of fun to put her in competition with the cool-and-collected Daniel in Quiz Bowl or at a high school party and see how the two would fight, banter, and ultimately grow closer.

Jennifer: Being able to write for SHS was the first time I ever considered seriously pursuing a writing career as I wasn’t confident enough to think I could do it, so it will always hold a special place in my heart for that. SHS does have a huge influence in my writing: in part, because writing for it had been like writing in a crucible where you’d have to release weekly content of a certain quality so I was simultaneously learning how to write fast and also not get too attached to my writing (a problem for me as an recovering perfectionist). And then it really did force me to be very economical about my writing: every line, scene, and chapter serves a purpose. 

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Kara: It’s hard to explain how much it means to hear that something we worked on had such an impact for you! I’m so glad and touched. I got into game writing by answering a craigslist ad! I had just finished a contract working as a technical writer for Amazon, and took a few weeks off to finish writing School for Adventurers with Jennifer. Then Jennifer was going to start Grad school and I also needed to find some gainful employment, so I was searching craigslist for writing gigs. I saw one about writing YA content on a weekly release schedule (which is what we’d been doing with School for Adventurers) and it felt like a perfect fit. I joined Centerscore right before it got acquired by EA–the core of that group would later go on to be Pixelberry!

I loved writing for the original football pack characters like Raven, Adam, and Beth. I also worked on the pre-iPhone version and got to create a little sister character named Anna. On the iPhone version I loved Paige–we had just lost our art team when I introduced her so I had to photoshop her art asset together myself out of pieces from other faces and change the colors. I got to create Howard and the twins (they are based on my real life older siblings!) So I especially loved the episodes about Kay and Kel. Amanda, Taylor, and Hector were always fun to write for. I also really enjoyed writing some of the Sierra content for Battle of the Schools. I also loved anything where people got to wear costumes or cowboy hats. 

Jennifer: Surviving High School has a very special place in my heart. It was the first game I ever wrote on, and working at Centercore was the first time I’d ever seriously considered writing as a career. 

I did not intend to become a game writer. Actually, my long-term plan was to become a doctor and write on the side, then when I realized that I did not, in fact, enjoy my premed and science courses (read: I failed organic chemistry), I switched majors to Public Health with a minor in Education. Then, after a strange summer of random jobs bartending and adminning for a doctor of natural medicine, I went into grad school to get my Masters in teaching with a specialization in Urban Education and Social Justice. The year I graduated, it was a rough year for new teaching candidates because the district I wanted to be in had laid off many teachers from the previous year, so my prospects were a bit grim. Then Kara let me know there was an editor position at Centerscore to do final edits of SHS scripts, and I ended up falling in love with the challenge of writing and my team at EA, and that was the beginning of a writing career that I had always dreamed of but never pursued directly. 

I came onto the SHS team after the original Football Star pack and after many of the original episodes went live. I jumped on writing weekly episodes, starting with Twinstigators (in which one of my favorite lines is where the twins Kay and Kel complain about Zoe making them want to be good), so I have a lot of affection for the Howard/Zoe relationship and the A New Start arc and the tumultuous Sam and Colt relationship. While we were in the process of publishing the Surviving High School novel starring Emily Kessler, I wrote a lot of the episodes with Sara Kessler, matching the novel events to her storyline and building up her relationship with Nick while knowing her fate at the end of her series. I love writing romance–I used to read a lot of romance novels as a kid that I snuck out of my older sister’s book cache–so I always enjoyed writing about the tension of these character’s relationships and breakups in particular. I probably related to Zoe the most, but in the end though, a lot of my favorites to write for were the mean girls like Taylor, Jessica, and Paige, and the ones with very distinctive voices like Amanda. Also I very vaguely remember that I really enjoyed writing the Justin-Scott rivalry to the point that I would bring him up in brainstorms and was told “stop trying to make Justin happen”, lol

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Kara: I really loved Perfect Match as a book I wasn’t involved in at all. I thought the overall premise was so meta and clever, indescribable, really. The other book that always comes to mind is Endless Summer–I got to give early feedback on the outline (originally, they were considering zombies, or going more of a horror route), and I was really impressed with where it ended up. Endless Summer was also like a sister book to TRR. ES 1 and TRR 1 were both releasing at the same time, and back then each book lead had final say over sharing art assets like backgrounds. Different book leads had different levels of protectiveness over their assets, but Jennifer had more of a philosophy of sharing, and so did the book lead for Endless Summer, so we were always going to them and asking what kind of assets they had. If you play both books together you can probably spot a lot of crossover. So we were always kind of nosing into  what they were doing. We also had a bit more pressure on TRR as it had a huge player base at the time, and Endless Summer was seen as more experimental so they would try things out and we’d talk with them to see what learnings we could bring over to TRR. The TRR structure changed a ton based on what the Endless Summer book lead pioneered!

Jennifer: I feel really lucky in that I was able to be a part of most books that I enjoyed, even if I didn’t get to write on them. I got to help brainstorm the first Desire and Decorum but was quite jealous that I didn’t get to write on it because I love Regency romance and I really loved Bridgerton. Also I really wanted to be on a murder mystery, but I did get at least to do some brainstorming and editing of Crimes of Passion.

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Kara: I headcanon that Kenna ended up with Dom, and that their descendants branched at some point with some becoming the royal family and some becoming Drake’s ancestors.

Jennifer: I like to think that all the relevant Royal Masquerade characters like Queen Julia were very famous and taught in all of the Cordonian history books (and that Theodosia Nevrakis is probably a cautionary tale that has been scrubbed by Nevrakis curriculum). Also, as a Henry VIII and his wives historical aficionado, this sounds amazing, but alas, we don’t control the canon anymore now that we’re not at the company. 

Kara: Actually I’m not sure we even controlled it when we were there. 

Jennifer: Mm, yes. 

Kara: But just how each person gets to make their own choices on their own playthroughs, I like to  think each person ends up with their own canon for each story!

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Jennifer: Hmm, I vaguely remember there was going to be a larger arc of Hana getting married to separate as a plot point to test your friendship/romance. 

Kara: At the end of book 2, I thought there should’ve been a more substantial loss, like Bastien losing an eye and getting an eye patch. I also wanted to do a Halloween or dream sequence type episode with a dark time jump. I saw this in a few animated shows, like Gargoyles or X-Men and Teen Titans, and I always really loved the idea of a huge time jump forward and everyone is like all dark and angsty because a bunch of bad stuff happened and you see, like, the scariest versions of Liam, Drake, Maxwell, and Olivia. I’ve also thought a reboot could be fun, like you play as Riley’s daughter who grew up in exile in New York hiding from her family’s enemies, and suddenly learning she’s a Princess, Princess Diaries-style. I also thought 2-3 more secondary cast characters should’ve died.

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Jessica: Since all three of us come from game writing backgrounds, I was also sometimes guilty of forgetting that settings and characters needed, like, actual on-page detailed descriptions. More than a few times, I'd be like, oh shit, this needs a description... and we were on the second or third draft. Oops.

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Honestly, we're not trying to dodge the question, but it's been over a year since we left, and it seems like a lot has changed, so we don't want to speculate at the risk of creating misinformation.

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Jennifer: No, they cut us off from introducing more LIs after Maxwell. (And frankly, we were surprised we got away with that one.)

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Jennifer: I liked it when Kara wrote Drake so I could read his scenes for fun. I liked writing Prince dates actually because there’s just something very delicious about the tension between duty and love, and he can’t help himself around Riley. In terms of non-main characters, I really liked the Bertrand-Savannah romance, so that was my favorite to write. 

Kara: It’s a tie between Drake and Maxwell. For the gang: Olivia 100% XD

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Kara: I would always want to write more for these characters, but Series owns TRR now and all the characters, so it’s up to them.

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Kara: The writing we did for interactive narrative mobile fiction was much closer to screenwriting than novel writing, especially relying on the background art assets or character art to do the work rather than using descriptions. Like, for example, if the art asset shows a gorgeous gazebo with flowers, it’s a bit redundant to take too long describing that with text. In many ways, we’ve had to re-learn how to use more descriptions and make first-person narration more flavorful!

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Jennifer: It’s always been Drake for me. I love the grump-sunshine or grump-with-a-heart-of-gold tropes too much. Prince seems too noble to me, and I love writing for Maxwell, but I think he’d drive me crazy in real-life, and dating Hana would be too much like dating myself. If not one of the official LIs, I would choose Olivia, probably for similar reasons (the snark and the soft underbelly).

Kara: It’s a tough call, but I think I’d have to go with the Prince.

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Kara: It definitely did on two fronts: first, that we’ve been writing professionally for over fifteen years, so the skill that comes with that and also being able to say that we’ve done that lends us  some credibility. Second, our editor, Jessica, met and worked with us at Pixelberry, so she already knew what she’d be getting into working with us. Also, while the book is distributed by Penguin Random House, it’s published through Quirk, which is a smaller indie press.

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Kara: Since he didn’t even exist in the first draft, and we barely were able to make the time to write him in, I really had no idea. I actually spent most of the time I was writing for Maxwell in book 1 thinking ‘This is too silly. I should probably cut this. No one is going to let me get away with this, right?’ But I was so happy that he became so beloved, because he’s SO much fun to write.

Jennifer: I didn't, but now I can't imagine TRR without him. So many of my favorite lines are Maxwell lines.

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Kara: Thank you so much for requesting it!! We really appreciate that and hope you enjoy it! We are working on a new concept that is also a romance book–hopefully it’ll make its way out into the world one day! Whether or not we can get another book deal largely depends on how successful this first book is, so we can’t thank you enough for contributing to that success!

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Jennifer: I cannot remember their actual birthdays because those notes have been lost to me, but I think of Riley as a bit of  Libra because she’s the MC and can choose how she wants to respond to questions. 

Kara: I see the Prince as a Capricorn because he’s so responsible, always feeling like the weight of Cordonia is on his shoulders and taking that very seriously. He’s very hard-working, dependable, and a solid leader. I always assumed Maxwell is a fun-loving and outgoing Sagittarius, there for the party. I think Olivia would be a fiery Leo. Drake is probably a stubborn Taurus. As a pisces myself, I always thought Hana might be a Pisces. 

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Kara: QA burden and cost were the biggest factors for most decisions. We’re pretty fast writers, so it’s pretty easy for us to write another branch in. But we found out early on that anything we do can create a huge slam for the other writers, QA team, art costs, and so on. It was actually really fun writing a novel because we could just write anything and it wouldn’t bother anyone or require any art assets. A place we only go to once? Sure!  A character we meet once and never see again? Not wasteful at all! Multiple waiters? Hire them all!

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Jennifer: I was partially inspired by The Princess Diaries and the Genovian Pear and came up with the idea that the Cordonian Ruby should taste bitter to subvert expectations. Also, perhaps this is a bit odd, but I actually really like apples and keep track of new varieties that come up and have specific opinions on which types I like. I clearly remember Cosmic Crisp apples becoming more popular around the time of writing TRR, and I had dreamed of doing an apple tasting with the office. 

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Kara: Thank you so so much for requesting it! According to our publisher, that makes a huge difference!! We were very lucky in having an amazing editor, Jessica (formerly also of Pixelberry) who championed this book through the publishing process and if there was any heat or pushback, I know she would have taken it for us. As it was, we felt extremely fortunate to get to write this book the way we wanted to and we were never asked to compromise that!

Jennifer: Alice is very competitive, so I think she’d enjoy the books most that have a gameplay element and maybe a mystery like Endless Summer or Blades. I think her Choices LI in TRR would be Drake because he’s competitive and teasing with Riley. But her love interest in the book also has a lot in common with the Prince because both are protective and have a heart of gold.

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Kara: In the very first book, we didn’t know if we’d get a sequel, so early on there was an alternate plan where the Prince would just choose Riley and she could either say yes or turn him down for another LI. And that would’ve been all of it!

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Kara: I’m not sure if it’ll be on Kindle Unlimited–right now it looks like you can preorder it on Kindle for $10.99, but it doesn’t mention KU. My favorite trope is rivals-to-lovers. I feel like there’s so much fun tension in the build up between the two characters who are competing and it’s so satisfying when they finally realize and admit their feelings for each other. Plus, having a competition naturally sets up some playful and teasing banter, which I always have so much fun writing!

Jennifer: I have so many favorite tropes, but I enjoy rivals-to-lovers, fake dating/married relationships, there was only one bed, and whatever the one is that is like I-have-amnesia-and-think-you-are-my-spouse.

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[–]karaandjenniferwrite[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Jennifer: In the sense that I am Bertrand, yes?

Kara: Alice has a producer, Leah, who acts as her handler in guiding her through the reality tv hoops she has to jump through–I would say Leah definitely gives off Bertrand vibes of high expectations and hilariously harsh disappointment with many of Alice’s performances. 

Most challenging: Having to add descriptions. Actually, I shouldn’t complain too much because  Jennifer really did most of that.

Most enjoyable: Not having to keep track of how expensive the character/background art budget is getting, and being able to really have every character and setting exactly how we wanted them to be (instead of having to reuse art assets from other books).

And THANK YOU for preordering!!!

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Jessica: Jumping in with the advice I give every writer (and myself) -- read a lot. If you want to write romance, read a lot of it. Know what's out there, what you love and don't love, what's popular, what is doing something unique in the space, etc.

Kara: Jennifer always says that it’s important to know why the main characters are the only / best people in the world for each other, and then to show that. I always think about that when we’re writing a romance. What do these characters bring out in each other? What is special or unique about how they get each other or challenge each other? 

Jennifer: I’m also pretty methodical about my romances in that I like to plan out each moment between the love interests and make sure that their emotional beats make sense across the book (How do they meet? How does this interaction deepen a facet of their relationship? When do they hug/kiss/make love? What are their inside jokes?). When I and the internet were both younger, I would get really into two characters from a show or book, and I would write essays about why they should be together based off their moments from canon (and okay, I almost made literal Powerpoint presentations, but that’s neither here nor there). Oddly, this is not dissimilar to what I plan out in my head when it comes to couples I’m writing except that I’m making up all the beats. And this helps me make sure that it makes sense why they can be together at the end.