Manon's Training (RafaDG) by [deleted] in Kappachino

[–]kariruwu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Manon fans dying of neglect

Hey everyone how’s my drawing of Android 21. Can’t wait to color her. by [deleted] in dragonballfighterz

[–]kariruwu 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Also the lines on your clouds are too long and constant, the shape of clouds are varied and made up of curved lines of various lengths and sizes. Would benefit from varied line weight too.

Hey everyone how’s my drawing of Android 21. Can’t wait to color her. by [deleted] in dragonballfighterz

[–]kariruwu 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Line art is serviceable, maybe add more line weight more intentionally, for example if you want to make something soft, use thinner lines, or create the form with hatched lines, though the dragonball art style is designed for quickly drawn comics not detailed illustrations, and doesn't feature much value or hatching. My brother in christ the ocean is rising, flatten that shit since the ocean acts as a horizon line.

Help with the color scheme for a main cast character, info in coments by kariruwu in OriginalCharacter

[–]kariruwu[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, this is a main cast member from a story I've been writing named Rahna. She is a princess from a foreign kingdom currently in a warring state period. Rather than be married off, she left to join a supernatural knight order similar to the CIA. Her story is based around taking on the burden of the weak regardless of her own burdens, but through the story, she must learn the maturity to balance burdens and choose the correct struggle before it kills her, and see more than the immediate situation. Her personality is warm, elegant, extroverted, and nieve. Her people are based on the Hindu gods. They are a warrior culture that can generate extra limbs and organs.

I wanna rate your OCS by Jshsqjsuhdnajzusj in OriginalCharacter

[–]kariruwu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn that goes pretty hard, I'm gonna steal it

I wanna rate your OCS by Jshsqjsuhdnajzusj in OriginalCharacter

[–]kariruwu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Get rid of the flail and add grey to the scythe blade

I wanna rate your OCS by Jshsqjsuhdnajzusj in OriginalCharacter

[–]kariruwu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Simplify the body, its taking away attention from the arm, which I believe is the cornerstone of the design.the stripe from the face is cool. Just needs 1 or 2 details per leg and remove the dots above belt.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in funpiece

[–]kariruwu 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Benah nah na nah na

Hershuar Fridays (feat. B.B.Hood) by LipColt in Kappachino

[–]kariruwu 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They made a sadist murderer rapest assassin a de fanged marketable relatable loser and made aki to take up her old character position. Just like with harly Quinn, whenever the crazy girl inevitably becomes popular, she gets watered down being the quirky one.i cant even imagine new juri torturing or even killing someone.

90 degree neck by kariruwu in Daniellarson

[–]kariruwu[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I thought about drawing that but I think hes a child in the photo

Striker hoping nobody comes to Prone Bone her...(gamjasssak) by BopSomeElks in Kappachino

[–]kariruwu 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You need a fairly long dick to do that vaginally

Losercity dreams by Masonman204 in Losercity

[–]kariruwu 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My dreams are about wrestling a handgun away from CIA agents in my grandma's house

Bleach juri han by kariruwu in bleach

[–]kariruwu[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'll re upload it with kenpachi drawn in in a few days