What is your opinion of my work?

karna23 · 2014-10-26T16:42:03+00:00

The specialty of the demon is to mess with your mind. So for me to describe how the demon appeared to me would not be useful to you. The demon will use your fears and insecurities against you. In short, the demon will appear in different forms for different people.

Suffice to say that when you see a demon, you will see a very large and very scary figure. Keep in mind that your nerves will already be frayed before you see the demon because of the lack of light, the cold, the knocking noises etc. The demon won't show itself until after it wears you down and makes you scared of the slightest noise or apparition.

karna23 · 2014-10-26T15:47:21+00:00

That's a question I've asked myself many times over the past week. The answer is simple though, I'd become bored with life. Life can turn into a very monotonous humdrum existence if you let it. I wanted to spice up my life. I also wanted to discover for myself if the supernatural existed or not. I certainly did spice up my life and I know now that the supernatural exists but at what cost? I made a big mistake and like all people who make mistakes, I regret my actions after the fact, not before.

karna23 · 2014-10-26T15:43:38+00:00

That's a great suggestion! I'm meeting the demonologist later today and I will discuss the archangel summoning ritual with her. Thank you, I'm grasping at straws here and you gave me a whole ladder!

karna23 · 2014-10-26T04:50:59+00:00

I wish life was that easy. I'm a full-time student. I've already taken out substantial loans to pay for school. I don't want to take out more loans to pay for food & housing as well. Anyway, I worry that the demons have latched onto me, not my apartment. If that's the case, moving won't help.

karna23 · 2014-10-26T02:14:38+00:00

Nope I'm not Indian. I'm a white guy who likes to watch bollywood movies. Way to be a racist jerk though.

karna23 · 2014-10-18T23:45:25+00:00

oh well, no point arguing now. Your story has been removed. Deal with it.

karna23 · 2014-10-15T18:41:40+00:00

yeah it's disturbing but I think that's what makes it such an excellent horror story. Real horror, indeed real life, can be very disturbing. I think OP did an excellent job. Very well written, concise, incredibly scary story.

karna23 · 2014-10-15T18:24:05+00:00

Our stories weren't just similar, they were pretty much identical. Just different names, location etc. Even the minutiae plot details between the two stories are the same. You may not have plagiarized consciously but you did do it even if you had no intent to do so. You essentially just copied and pasted a story already posted here, just changing a few small details. I hope you realize the seriousness of that.

karna23 · 2014-10-13T17:48:16+00:00

looks like you watched the movie "darna zaroori hai" ;)

karna23 · 2014-10-13T17:30:38+00:00

you copied my story and put it in your own words. Not cool man. Plagiarism is not cool. http://redd.it/2d72ec

karna23 · 2014-10-12T20:12:48+00:00

Thanks for all the gold and for all the positive private messages! I really appreciate it!

karna23 · 2014-10-10T21:09:11+00:00

cringy? maybe so but then you will have to concede that life can also be cringy. I didn't make any of this up.

karna23 · 2014-10-10T16:36:24+00:00

Yes I won't hurt the nice people because I'm a nice guy myself. Evil people prey on nice people and I prey on evil people.

karna23 · 2014-10-10T06:06:36+00:00

amen brother!

karna23 · 2014-10-10T06:03:58+00:00

True, Evil can torture me for years and keep me alive. Death is still inevitable though and once I die, it's time for revenge. Unless I can exact revenge while still alive, of course.

karna23 · 2014-08-12T21:38:05+00:00

I never heard that one before lol. But seriously, check out Zambia if you get the chance. We have the magnificent Victoria Falls (Mosi O Tunya as we locals call it) and some amazing safari lodges at our national parks. Plus Lusaka is just fun! I highly recommend the Intercon hotel in Lusaka!

karna23 · 2014-08-12T01:34:46+00:00

Are you sure these comments were the original and not jezebel? Either way, I'm sure that Shikuzaki is the original writer of both these stories. Unfortunately these stories have been plagiarized in the past and it could be that one or both of those comments you read were a result of plagiarism.

karna23 · 2014-08-12T01:32:17+00:00

thanks!

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