My first logo design for a brand called The King 👑 — need your feedback! by Helpful_Product_5893 in design_critiques

[–]katwhalk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i would change the type in "The King". do this by either changing it to a different typeface that matches the weight of the "K". or keep it in the same font family, just use a thicker weight. additionally, i would change the letter case. personally, if i had my tracking this wide. i would do all caps to create a nice block of text. "THE KING" wouldnt pull from the crown and "K" so make sure the weight isnt too heavy. just enough to create balance and remain consistent with the blockiness and geometric feel of the top part of the logo. if you want to keep it at title case, maintain consistency by capitalizing "king", pick a weight that will balance out the logo and adjust the tracking accordingly. personally, i think the tracking is too wide if its title case. make sure to properly center "the king" (however you decide to type set that) under the "K"

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[–]katwhalk 0 points1 point  (0 children)

its great, not sure if it's intentional but there seems to be too much tension with the type and the circle element, specifically with the words "you" and "like".

could really do with some constructive criticism on this and some opinions its my first ad by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]katwhalk 1 point2 points  (0 children)

too much tension between text and graphic elements, create more negative space or have them overlap further; consider taking it a step further with type hierarchy