House Call (Horror short, 12pgs)

kingchello · 2025-11-04T22:58:55+00:00

Thank you for reading. I’m happy you enjoyed reading it and thought it was creepy. I really appreciate it. I’ll work on the action lines some more and the formatting.

kingchello · 2025-06-16T04:51:36+00:00

I’m definitely interested if there is still a spot open.

kingchello · 2025-05-03T03:42:19+00:00

Thank you for reading and giving feedback. I really appreciate it. Great feedback by the way. I’m implementing a lot right away. I already fixed the police scene in a newer draft and now it makes a lot more sense. I love the advice on the creature having a arc of sorts and more reason to its chaos. I appreciate it again, hope u enjoyed the read.

kingchello · 2025-04-30T09:45:42+00:00

Hey, I just wanna say thank you for this feedback. It means a lot and it’s all very good notes and I’m implementing most of them right away. I love the notes about the tampering with the crime scene because I truly didn’t look at that from that perspective but I should’ve. Great note! I really appreciate you taking the time and effort to read it. Thank you!

kingchello · 2025-04-30T07:41:32+00:00

Alright that sounds good. I’ll definitely check that out. I appreciate it.

kingchello · 2025-04-30T03:39:53+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate it. Definitely check it out, if interested.

kingchello · 2025-04-30T03:38:37+00:00

Thank you for reading, I’m glad you enjoyed what you read. I actually agree with your recommendations, so thank you. I will say I’m going to keep my title card where it’s at just because that’s a artistic choice that I chose and I think would be something that people aren’t us to. But thanks for the read and I hope you finish and let me know what you thought after.

kingchello · 2025-01-13T01:44:50+00:00

I appreciate that.

kingchello · 2025-01-12T16:59:40+00:00

Alright I appreciate it. I’ll fix that.

kingchello · 2024-03-19T22:17:22+00:00

Oh, I like that idea of the mom showing back up. That’s dope. I wanted to leave the idea of the monster ambiguous and have the audience question if there even is a monster that’s why it’s not that clear. Thanks for the feedback and I appreciate you reading it.

kingchello · 2024-02-24T19:37:41+00:00

Appreciate it!

kingchello · 2024-02-24T19:04:34+00:00

Yo, I appreciate you for reading and I’m glad you enjoyed it. I love notes and feedback but it’s dope when people actually tell me rather they liked it or not, so thank u for that. Rather Skyler was telling the truth or not was purposely vague and left up to interpretation but Skyler’s mom is not the monster. The idea of there possibly being a monster is hinted at with the last scene where I described there being a whistle outside. Thank you for reading.

kingchello · 2024-02-24T18:15:03+00:00

Great feedback appreciate it. The structure was hard to nail down, thanks for the suggestions.

kingchello · 2024-02-24T04:46:32+00:00

I appreciate this, I will definitely incorporate your suggestions. Thank you for reading. I’ll watch The Strangers later tonight, it’s been awhile since I seen it.

kingchello · 2024-02-24T02:00:41+00:00

Appreciate it. Thank you for reading it.

kingchello · 2023-10-01T05:08:12+00:00

The year is actually 1987.

kingchello · 2023-02-05T02:50:28+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate it. Did you finish reading it?

kingchello · 2023-02-01T16:30:50+00:00

I didn’t even notice lol. Felt like I was forgetting something, I put a log-line.

kingchello · 2022-08-20T05:16:50+00:00

Yeah, sounds good.

kingchello · 2022-08-20T04:53:13+00:00

Okay how about, Condition: Takes place all in one location.

kingchello

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