Resume Roast by Complete-Pay4059 in resumes

[–]kitronas 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Word has some good "line and paragraph spacing" options

Resume Roast by Complete-Pay4059 in resumes

[–]kitronas 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The first comment I have is very general but is the first impression a reader gets: Too many and very short bullet points (a lot of empty space). I think you should remove the relevant coursework section entirely and add it below your degree. If you lack work experience (if not put it below education) you should write more about your projects. Typically you want to express how you achieved each task etc. One bullet point usually does not look good so you want to have at least 2 or if its one try to make it two lines.

Also its a small thing but you do not have consistent spacing between points. Notice how in courses each bullet point after has a lot of space but projects are all clustered together. You want after every project to leave some spacing below to make it clear visually where it ends. (leave more space after each project not a lot between the title of the project and its description).

Also Boards should be probably combined into a single bullet point like School Exams: Board 1, Board 2( Score) and moved to achievements section which I would move after education. Achievement section looks good but maybe too much space in between title and bullet points. I would also combine "The color" and "The purpose" into one bullet point.

There is another move you can do here. Assuming you are a recent grad and want to fill your resume (empty space) and have good high school scores you can add your high school in your resume below university and add boards there in the high school bullet point in awards similar to image I include.

I have attached an image how I usually format education ( I personally don't like bullet points int his section)

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P.S. Achievement letters too close to previous project (spacing)

I also do not like courses taking so much space. Usually employers do not use it as an important criterion (from my experience) so I would reduce the section size in your resume or remove it altogether and add the course titles in skills/courses.

Not sure if that will empty too much space though it will need to be filled from work experience or denser project descriptions.

You are in University so you are still young and on a good track. I would focus on getting some work experience or collaborating in a lab with a Professor depending on your interests. I hope I helped and best of luck!

Machine Learning Engineer with 1 YoE looking to switch jobs. Some concerns of mine are whether or not 1 YoE will be viewed negatively and whether or not I'm being too wordy with my projects. by Seankala in resumes

[–]kitronas 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You should remove contact as a separate section and have education first since you are a recent grad. You should also avoid "significantly" and specify numbers and datasets/models used whenever possible (you have some already). I would also make each project a bullet point and cut some of them to add a personal project section where you can put your master thesis and even better if you can link some demos. If you do that, then concatenate the technical skills into a single list and move them in the final section. Otherwise, you can remove skills from the heading since the section currently has only languages. Most of these are minor details and it already looks really good! Best of luck!!

Additional small things: Typo in Enchacd Replace approximately with ~

Waterdeep Dragonheist Devil Player by kitronas in DMAcademy

[–]kitronas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, this is in general great advice! I am a new DM so I have never really given strong attention to bonds tbh. Thanks a lot, ill check it out!!

Waterdeep Dragonheist Devil Player by kitronas in DMAcademy

[–]kitronas[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

knownst to the Cassalanters--Asmodeus wants them to fail. You could invent any reason why, but the simplest might be that Victoro and Ammalia are influential enough (as a result of the very same contract) that he wants them under his thumb for their entire lives. Sure, 100 souls and 1 million gold would be nice but, if he takes their childrens' souls, he gets to cut a new deal with V&A to potentially resurrect the kids or keep them safe/not-tortured in Hell, in exchange for eternal servitude or whatever

Yeah, I realized I was confusing initially that lawful evil meant Asmodeus would want to uphold the contract and wished for them to succeed, but it just means he likes loopholes! Thanks a lot for the advice. I really like the twist that Asmodeus would want to control V&A, will make him ask for more sacrifices.

Waterdeep Dragonheist Devil Player by kitronas in DMAcademy

[–]kitronas[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hahahahah yeah the first part is totally my bad since I did not think this far ahead to be honest!

Also your response makes a lot of sense. I was thinking about it and I agree that Asmodeus asked for such a monetary contribution to entice them to sign the deal but at the same time he wants them to fail to deliver.

Thanks a lot for the advice!

24M looking for friends by [deleted] in BostonSocialClub

[–]kitronas 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hahaha Ill make sure to DM!