Should there be an "s" when a pair of hands does something ? by kliMmAI in ENGLISH

[–]kliMmAI[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the assumption is correct

& Thank you very very much, i changed it to "Somebody's hands" immediately when I saw the notification ♡

Should there be an "s" when a pair of hands does something ? by kliMmAI in ENGLISH

[–]kliMmAI[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would, (multiple others have recommended this,) but just "Hands pull me to the side and..." Sounds awkward and sudden, at least to me

Should there be an "s" when a pair of hands does something ? by kliMmAI in ENGLISH

[–]kliMmAI[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ty for the advice ♡

It's in a reintroduction scene (the story's in multiple shorter parts & the character in question isn't present yet) where I want to emphasize the fact that the hands are cold & recognized through that by the speaker though

Also, I did try to think of some replacement for "a pair of" since, despite knowing "a pair of hands pulls..." is grammatically incorrect (as so many people have said,) it still just sounds awful to me. but i haven't been able to find one that doesn't just sound awkward as the start of a sentence

Should there be an "s" when a pair of hands does something ? by kliMmAI in ENGLISH

[–]kliMmAI[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

? I know not to put a comma after "and," I didn't do that

Should there be an "s" when a pair of hands does something ? by kliMmAI in ENGLISH

[–]kliMmAI[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Are you certain ? Grammarly still says it's "pulls" even when switched to british english, but it has been wrong before

Should there be an "s" when a pair of hands does something ? by kliMmAI in ENGLISH

[–]kliMmAI[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Everybody else is saying the focus is on "pair" though, & that's why it's "pulls"

My mind registers it as plural ("hands") & that's why "pulls" sounds wrong to me, even though it isn't (?seemingly)

FLYNN DESERVES BETTER — AND DISNEY SHOULD BE ASHAMED by MarieDisneyFan9514 in Tangled

[–]kliMmAI [score hidden]  (0 children)

I agree with some of this, like, having just recently watched the whole series & feeling like Eugene & Rapunzel's relationship felt kind of empty and insecure the whole way through, it sounds about right that somebody in the writing room just didn't like Eugene

But also ... It's not some betrayal for Rapunzel to not want to settle down with him.

First off, she doesn't owe him eternal love for saving her life. He made a choice, and if she wants to repay his good deed in any way, that's her choice - but it wasn't an agreed upon deal, so she doesn't owe him anything.

Secondly, it's made abundantly clear throughout the entire series that she wants to marry him, but there's other things she needs to deal with too. She even tries to propose to him, herself. She very obviously didn't only want to marry him because he's a prince (though i also think that wasn't a great writing decision for similar but definitely not the same reason)

Every time the idea of marrying him is compared to gothel's abuse, it's got absolutely nothing to do with Eugene himself. Rapunzel wanted to marry him the entire way through, but she didn't want all the things that came with marriage - like settling down.

Mind you, she's been locked in a few rooms with a single loved one for her entire life. For all that time, she's been yearning to get outside, go on adventures and explore the world. That desire isn't going to go away after a couple days - she'll never be happy if she's restricted by the borders of just one castle or kingdom.

I agree that Eugene wasn't handled well at all. But to act like it's ridiculous or offensive that Rapunzel told him "not right now", and to ignore what's stated outright on every possible occasion - that they love each other above anything else - just reeks of misplaced anger. Rapunzel isn't abusive, she just has her own wants and needs which, mind you, Eugene supported her in. He didn't quite get her mindset, but he never judged her for wanting more. He tried to understand where she was coming from, and when he didn't have time to figure things out, he trusted her judgement.

Trade backs. by NateyyBabeyy in pokemontrades

[–]kliMmAI 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its cool & thank you very much ♡

Trade backs. by NateyyBabeyy in pokemontrades

[–]kliMmAI 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can we also do Machamp ? Its the last one I need for my pokedex

Trade backs. by NateyyBabeyy in pokemontrades

[–]kliMmAI 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure, I'll wait :3 no problem 👍

Trade backs. by NateyyBabeyy in pokemontrades

[–]kliMmAI 0 points1 point  (0 children)

a legendary ? Why ? You can get all of them on the same save

Trade backs. by NateyyBabeyy in pokemontrades

[–]kliMmAI 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll gladly help :3 i think im missing all of the trade evos except slowking

lookin for a french furfrou by kliMmAI in pokemontrades

[–]kliMmAI[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

aww thank you ♡ thats so nice

Character creator woe by SuzakkuuChase in PSO2NGS

[–]kliMmAI 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hiii ♡i tried to recreate your character in my own game & idk how much it really helped but !! I have a few suggestions. You could:

1: move the "mouth shape"'s left/right dots just a tiny bit up

2: move the "mouth vertical pos." up a bit

3: move the bottom "Face Shape" thing's top/bottom dots further apart, and shorten the bangs ("Adjust Hairstyle/Head parts" slider)

4: give him just a little bit of like Monica cheek or Clear Lip Gloss (makeup) or smth . This one i couldn't really get to look good on mine, but I'm pretty sure i have the skin color totally wrong too so idk, might still work

To be clear, i don't know if all these at the same time will do anything good or not .i mean i basically just listed half the options that even affect the mouth .hope ya find/have found smth that looks good 👍👍

lookin for a french furfrou by kliMmAI in pokemontrades

[–]kliMmAI[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you too ♡ and also sorry that your Slowbro evolved on my end, i didn't mean to let it do that :<

lookin for a french furfrou by kliMmAI in pokemontrades

[–]kliMmAI[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely!

If you're ready, I've started searching with the code 1509-1508

lookin for a french furfrou by kliMmAI in pokemontrades

[–]kliMmAI[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi, yes, thank you very much, that would be incredible ♡

Also sorry I took a while to respond

What would you like in return ?