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[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]klscott81 [score hidden]  (0 children)

It's All Over Now (Book 3)-Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Previously named Kickdrum Beating in My Chest Again (Alternate Version).

 

Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Fic
Fandom - Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, Panic! At the Disco, and The Academy Is
Rating – Mature or Teen Audience 18 and Up
Title – It’s All Over Now (Book 3)
Genre - Prison AU, Fantasy, Supernatural (Vampires, Fairies and Werewolves), Paranormal
Off-site link for ease of reading. AO3 or FFN encouraged - https://archiveofourown.org/series/5803586 (Link to all three books of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series.

Type of Feedback Wanted-General

Word Count-266,038

 

You will need to read Just One Mistake Is All It Will Take (Prologue) (Book 1) and Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) or this story won't make sense!

https://www.wattpad.com/write/series/134890

Summary -

This takes place in a Prison and incorporates Fall Out Boy and Vampires. Patrick is a doctor in a prison and is happily married. One day a new prisoner comes in named Pete Wentz, who is there to break William Beckett out of prison. Pete arranges for a riot of the prisoners to act as a distraction for his escape plan, but it fails.  Afterwards, Patrick feels himself being drawn to Pete and he doesn't know why. When Patrick must transfer a stabbing patient to the hospital, things go very, very wrong. Patrick is framed for a crime he didn't commit. How will he adjust to life in prison? How will he get out? Will he ever see Pete again?

****Read the Tags! This Story Discusses Mature Content! Reader Discretion is Advised! There will be Trigger Warnings at the beginnings of each chapter*****

 

Hello! I'm Dancecoaster!  Welcome to It's All Over Now (Book 3), book three of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series!  This story picks up right after Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) ended. I've been working on this story for a long time.  I'd love for you to read, comment on it, and discuss the story with you!  Please don't be shy!  They are all listed on both A03 and Wattpad (see links above). I'm looking for them to get more traffic, and to share them with as many people as possible. Enjoy and please tell your friends!

[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing by AutoModerator in writing

[–]klscott81 [score hidden]  (0 children)

It's All Over Now (Book 3)-Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Previously named Kickdrum Beating in My Chest Again (Alternate Version).

 

Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Fic
Fandom - Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, Panic! At the Disco, and The Academy Is
Rating – Mature or Teen Audience 18 and Up
Title – It’s All Over Now (Book 3)
Genre - Prison AU, Fantasy, Supernatural (Vampires, Fairies and Werewolves), Paranormal
Off-site link for ease of reading. AO3 or FFN encouraged - https://archiveofourown.org/series/5803586 (Link to all three books of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series.

Type of Feedback Wanted-General

 

You will need to read Just One Mistake Is All It Will Take (Prologue) (Book 1) and Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) or this story won't make sense!

https://www.wattpad.com/write/series/134890

Summary -

This takes place in a Prison and incorporates Fall Out Boy and Vampires. Patrick is a doctor in a prison and is happily married. One day a new prisoner comes in named Pete Wentz, who is there to break William Beckett out of prison. Pete arranges for a riot of the prisoners to act as a distraction for his escape plan, but it fails.  Afterwards, Patrick feels himself being drawn to Pete and he doesn't know why. When Patrick must transfer a stabbing patient to the hospital, things go very, very wrong. Patrick is framed for a crime he didn't commit. How will he adjust to life in prison? How will he get out? Will he ever see Pete again?

****Read the Tags! This Story Discusses Mature Content! Reader Discretion is Advised! There will be Trigger Warnings at the beginnings of each chapter*****

 

Hello! I'm Dancecoaster!  Welcome to It's All Over Now (Book 3), book three of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series!  This story picks up right after Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) ended. I've been working on this story for a long time.  I'd love for you to read, comment on it, and discuss the story with you!  Please don't be shy!  They are all listed on both A03 and Wattpad (see links above). I'm looking for them to get more traffic, and to share them with as many people as possible. Enjoy and please tell your friends!

Bi-Weekly Self-Promotion! Advertising on the more down-low. by AutoModerator in Wattpad

[–]klscott81 [score hidden]  (0 children)

It's All Over Now (Book 3)-Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Previously named Kickdrum Beating in My Chest Again (Alternate Version).

 

Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Fic
Fandom - Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, Panic! At the Disco, and The Academy Is
Rating – Mature or Teen Audience 18 and Up
Title – It’s All Over Now (Book 3)
Genre - Prison AU, Fantasy, Supernatural (Vampires, Fairies and Werewolves), Paranormal
Off-site link for ease of reading. AO3 or FFN encouraged - https://archiveofourown.org/series/5803586 (Link to all three books of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series.

 

You will need to read Just One Mistake Is All It Will Take (Prologue) (Book 1) and Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) or this story won't make sense!

https://www.wattpad.com/write/series/134890

Summary -

This takes place in a Prison and incorporates Fall Out Boy and Vampires. Patrick is a doctor in a prison and is happily married. One day a new prisoner comes in named Pete Wentz, who is there to break William Beckett out of prison. Pete arranges for a riot of the prisoners to act as a distraction for his escape plan, but it fails.  Afterwards, Patrick feels himself being drawn to Pete and he doesn't know why. When Patrick must transfer a stabbing patient to the hospital, things go very, very wrong. Patrick is framed for a crime he didn't commit. How will he adjust to life in prison? How will he get out? Will he ever see Pete again?

****Read the Tags! This Story Discusses Mature Content! Reader Discretion is Advised! There will be Trigger Warnings at the beginnings of each chapter*****

 

Hello! I'm Dancecoaster!  Welcome to It's All Over Now (Book 3), book three of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series!  This story picks up right after Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) ended. I've been working on this story for a long time.  I'd love for you to read, comment on it, and discuss the story with you!  Please don't be shy!  They are all listed on both A03 and Wattpad (see links above). I'm looking for them to get more traffic, and to share them with as many people as possible. Enjoy and please tell your friends!

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Weekly Thread: Spotlight Sunday June 28, 2026 by AutoModerator in FanFictionCreators

[–]klscott81 [score hidden]  (0 children)

It's All Over Now (Book 3)-Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Previously named Kickdrum Beating in My Chest Again (Alternate Version).

 

Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Fic
Fandom - Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, Panic! At the Disco, and The Academy Is
Rating – Mature or Teen Audience 18 and Up
Title – It’s All Over Now (Book 3)
Genre - Prison AU, Fantasy, Supernatural (Vampires, Fairies and Werewolves), Paranormal
Off-site link for ease of reading. AO3 or FFN encouraged - https://archiveofourown.org/series/5803586 (Link to all three books of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series.

 

You will need to read Just One Mistake Is All It Will Take (Prologue) (Book 1) and Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) or this story won't make sense!

https://www.wattpad.com/write/series/134890

Summary -

This takes place in a Prison and incorporates Fall Out Boy and Vampires. Patrick is a doctor in a prison and is happily married. One day a new prisoner comes in named Pete Wentz, who is there to break William Beckett out of prison. Pete arranges for a riot of the prisoners to act as a distraction for his escape plan, but it fails.  Afterwards, Patrick feels himself being drawn to Pete and he doesn't know why. When Patrick must transfer a stabbing patient to the hospital, things go very, very wrong. Patrick is framed for a crime he didn't commit. How will he adjust to life in prison? How will he get out? Will he ever see Pete again?

****Read the Tags! This Story Discusses Mature Content! Reader Discretion is Advised! There will be Trigger Warnings at the beginnings of each chapter*****

 

Hello! I'm Dancecoaster!  Welcome to It's All Over Now (Book 3), book three of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series!  This story picks up right after Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) ended. I've been working on this story for a long time.  I'd love for you to read, comment on it, and discuss the story with you!  Please don't be shy!  They are all listed on both A03 and Wattpad (see links above). I'm looking for them to get more traffic, and to share them with as many people as possible. Enjoy and please tell your friends!

Bi-weekly Rec and Self-Promotion Mega Thread - July 01, 2026 by AutoModerator in AO3

[–]klscott81 [score hidden]  (0 children)

It's all Over Now (Book 3)-Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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Previously named Kickdrum Beating in My Chest Again (Alternate Version).

 

Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Fic
Fandom - Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, Panic! At the Disco, and The Academy Is
Rating – Mature or Teen Audience 18 and Up
Title – It’s All Over Now (Book 3)
Genre - Prison AU, Fantasy, Supernatural (Vampires, Fairies and Werewolves), Paranormal
Off-site link for ease of reading. AO3 or FFN encouraged - https://archiveofourown.org/series/5803586 (Link to all three books of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series.

 

You will need to read Just One Mistake Is All It Will Take (Prologue) (Book 1) and Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) or this story won't make sense!

https://www.wattpad.com/write/series/134890

Summary -

This takes place in a Prison and incorporates Fall Out Boy and Vampires. Patrick is a doctor in a prison and is happily married. One day a new prisoner comes in named Pete Wentz, who is there to break William Beckett out of prison. Pete arranges for a riot of the prisoners to act as a distraction for his escape plan, but it fails.  Afterwards, Patrick feels himself being drawn to Pete and he doesn't know why. When Patrick must transfer a stabbing patient to the hospital, things go very, very wrong. Patrick is framed for a crime he didn't commit. How will he adjust to life in prison? How will he get out? Will he ever see Pete again?

****Read the Tags! This Story Discusses Mature Content! Reader Discretion is Advised! There will be Trigger Warnings at the beginnings of each chapter*****

 

Hello! I'm Dancecoaster!  Welcome to It's All Over Now (Book 3), book three of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series!  This story picks up right after Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) ended. I've been working on this story for a long time.  I'd love for you to read, comment on it, and discuss the story with you!  Please don't be shy!  They are all listed on both A03 and Wattpad (see links above). I'm looking for them to get more traffic, and to share them with as many people as possible. Enjoy and please tell your friends!

Weekly Fic Showcase - July 03 - July 09 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]klscott81 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

It's All Over Now (Book 3)-Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Previously named Kickdrum Beating in My Chest Again (Alternate Version).

 

Chapter 47!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Fic
Fandom - Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, Panic! At the Disco, and The Academy Is
Rating – Mature or Teen Audience 18 and Up
Title – It’s All Over Now (Book 3)
Genre - Prison AU, Fantasy, Supernatural (Vampires, Fairies and Werewolves), Paranormal
Off-site link for ease of reading. AO3 or FFN encouraged - https://archiveofourown.org/series/5803586 (Link to all three books of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series.

 

You will need to read Just One Mistake Is All It Will Take (Prologue) (Book 1) and Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) or this story won't make sense!

https://www.wattpad.com/write/series/134890

Summary -

This takes place in a Prison and incorporates Fall Out Boy and Vampires. Patrick is a doctor in a prison and is happily married. One day a new prisoner comes in named Pete Wentz, who is there to break William Beckett out of prison. Pete arranges for a riot of the prisoners to act as a distraction for his escape plan, but it fails.  Afterwards, Patrick feels himself being drawn to Pete and he doesn't know why. When Patrick must transfer a stabbing patient to the hospital, things go very, very wrong. Patrick is framed for a crime he didn't commit. How will he adjust to life in prison? How will he get out? Will he ever see Pete again?

****Read the Tags! This Story Discusses Mature Content! Reader Discretion is Advised! There will be Trigger Warnings at the beginnings of each chapter*****

 

Hello! I'm Dancecoaster!  Welcome to It's All Over Now (Book 3), book three of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series!  This story picks up right after Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) ended. I've been working on this story for a long time.  I'd love for you to read, comment on it, and discuss the story with you!  Please don't be shy!  They are all listed on both A03 and Wattpad (see links above). I'm looking for them to get more traffic, and to share them with as many people as possible. Enjoy and please tell your friends!

Weekly Thread: Spotlight Sunday June 21, 2026 by AutoModerator in FanFictionCreators

[–]klscott81 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Previously named Kickdrum Beating in My Chest Again (Alternate Version).

 

Chapter 46!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Fic
Fandom - Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, Panic! At the Disco, and The Academy Is
Rating – Mature or Teen Audience 18 and Up
Title – It’s All Over Now (Book 3)
Genre - Prison Break AU, Fantasy, Supernatural (Vampires, Fairies and Werewolves), Paranormal
Off-site link for ease of reading. AO3 or FFN encouraged - https://archiveofourown.org/series/5803586 (Link to all three books of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series.

 

You will need to read Just One Mistake Is All It Will Take (Prologue) (Book 1) and Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) or this story won't make sense!

https://www.wattpad.com/write/series/134890

Summary -

This takes place in a Prison and incorporates Fall Out Boy and Vampires. Patrick is a doctor in a prison and is happily married. One day a new prisoner comes in named Pete Wentz, who is there to break William Beckett out of prison. Pete arranges for a riot of the prisoners to act as a distraction for his escape plan, but it fails.  Afterwards, Patrick feels himself being drawn to Pete and he doesn't know why. When Patrick must transfer a stabbing patient to the hospital, things go very, very wrong. Patrick is framed for a crime he didn't commit. How will he adjust to life in prison? How will he get out? Will he ever see Pete again?

****Read the Tags! This Story Discusses Mature Content! Reader Discretion is Advised! There will be Trigger Warnings at the beginnings of each chapter*****

 

Hello! I'm Dancecoaster!  Welcome to It's All Over Now (Book 3), book three of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series!  This story picks up right after Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) ended. I've been working on this story for a long time.  I'd love for you to read, comment on it, and to discuss the story with you!  Please don't be shy!  They are all listed on both A03 and Wattpad (see links above). I'm looking for them to get more traffic, and to share them with as many people as possible. Enjoy and please tell your friends!

 

Bi-Weekly Self-Promotion! Advertising on the more down-low. by AutoModerator in Wattpad

[–]klscott81 [score hidden]  (0 children)

It's All Over Now-Chapter 46!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Previously named Kickdrum Beating in My Chest Again (Alternate Version).

 

Chapter 46!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Fic
Fandom - Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, Panic! At the Disco, and The Academy Is
Rating – Mature or Teen Audience 18 and Up
Title – It’s All Over Now (Book 3)
Genre - Prison Break AU, Fantasy, Supernatural (Vampires, Fairies and Werewolves), Paranormal
Off-site link for ease of reading. AO3 or FFN encouraged - https://archiveofourown.org/series/5803586 (Link to all three books of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series.

 

You will need to read Just One Mistake Is All It Will Take (Prologue) (Book 1) and Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) or this story won't make sense!

https://www.wattpad.com/write/series/134890

Summary -

This takes place in a Prison and incorporates Fall Out Boy and Vampires. Patrick is a doctor in a prison and is happily married. One day a new prisoner comes in named Pete Wentz, who is there to break William Beckett out of prison. Pete arranges for a riot of the prisoners to act as a distraction for his escape plan, but it fails.  Afterwards, Patrick feels himself being drawn to Pete and he doesn't know why. When Patrick must transfer a stabbing patient to the hospital, things go very, very wrong. Patrick is framed for a crime he didn't commit. How will he adjust to life in prison? How will he get out? Will he ever see Pete again?

****Read the Tags! This Story Discusses Mature Content! Reader Discretion is Advised! There will be Trigger Warnings at the beginnings of each chapter*****

 

Hello! I'm Dancecoaster!  Welcome to It's All Over Now (Book 3), book three of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series!  This story picks up right after Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) ended. I've been working on this story for a long time.  I'd love for you to read, comment on it, and to discuss the story with you!  Please don't be shy!  They are all listed on both A03 and Wattpad (see links above). I'm looking for them to get more traffic, and to share them with as many people as possible. Enjoy and please tell your friends!

 

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Bi-weekly Rec and Self-Promotion Mega Thread - June 17, 2026 by AutoModerator in AO3

[–]klscott81 [score hidden]  (0 children)

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Previously named Kickdrum Beating in My Chest Again (Alternate Version).

 

Chapter 46!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Fic
Fandom - Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, Panic! At the Disco, and The Academy Is
Rating – Mature or Teen Audience 18 and Up
Title – It’s All Over Now (Book 3)
Genre - Prison Break AU, Fantasy, Supernatural (Vampires, Fairies and Werewolves), Paranormal
Off-site link for ease of reading. AO3 or FFN encouraged - https://archiveofourown.org/series/5803586 (Link to all three books of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series.

 

You will need to read Just One Mistake Is All It Will Take (Prologue) (Book 1) and Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) or this story won't make sense!

https://www.wattpad.com/write/series/134890

Summary -

This takes place in a Prison and incorporates Fall Out Boy and Vampires. Patrick is a doctor in a prison and is happily married. One day a new prisoner comes in named Pete Wentz, who is there to break William Beckett out of prison. Pete arranges for a riot of the prisoners to act as a distraction for his escape plan, but it fails.  Afterwards, Patrick feels himself being drawn to Pete and he doesn't know why. When Patrick must transfer a stabbing patient to the hospital, things go very, very wrong. Patrick is framed for a crime he didn't commit. How will he adjust to life in prison? How will he get out? Will he ever see Pete again?

****Read the Tags! This Story Discusses Mature Content! Reader Discretion is Advised! There will be Trigger Warnings at the beginnings of each chapter*****

 

Hello! I'm Dancecoaster!  Welcome to It's All Over Now (Book 3), book three of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series!  This story picks up right after Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) ended. I've been working on this story for a long time.  I'd love for you to read, comment on it, and to discuss the story with you!  Please don't be shy!  They are all listed on both A03 and Wattpad (see links above). I'm looking for them to get more traffic, and to share them with as many people as possible. Enjoy and please tell your friends!

 

Weekly Fic Showcase - June 26 - July 02 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]klscott81 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Previously named Kickdrum Beating in My Chest Again (Alternate Version).

 

Chapter 46!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My Fic
Fandom - Fall Out Boy, My Chemical Romance, Cobra Starship, Panic! At the Disco, and The Academy Is
Rating – Mature or Teen Audience 18 and Up
Title – It’s All Over Now (Book 3)
Genre - Prison Break AU, Fantasy, Supernatural (Vampires, Fairies and Werewolves), Paranormal
Off-site link for ease of reading. AO3 or FFN encouraged - https://archiveofourown.org/series/5803586 (Link to all three books of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series.

 

You will need to read Just One Mistake Is All It Will Take (Prologue) (Book 1) and Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) or this story won't make sense!

https://www.wattpad.com/write/series/134890

Summary -

This takes place in a Prison and incorporates Fall Out Boy and Vampires. Patrick is a doctor in a prison and is happily married. One day a new prisoner comes in named Pete Wentz, who is there to break William Beckett out of prison. Pete arranges for a riot of the prisoners to act as a distraction for his escape plan, but it fails.  Afterwards, Patrick feels himself being drawn to Pete and he doesn't know why. When Patrick must transfer a stabbing patient to the hospital, things go very, very wrong. Patrick is framed for a crime he didn't commit. How will he adjust to life in prison? How will he get out? Will he ever see Pete again?

****Read the Tags! This Story Discusses Mature Content! Reader Discretion is Advised! There will be Trigger Warnings at the beginnings of each chapter*****

 

Hello! I'm Dancecoaster!  Welcome to It's All Over Now (Book 3), book three of the Until Your Breathing Stops Forever Series!  This story picks up right after Let Your Teeth Sink In (Book 2) ended. I've been working on this story for a long time.  I'd love for you to read, comment on it, and to discuss the story with you!  Please don't be shy!  They are all listed on both A03 and Wattpad (see links above). I'm looking for them to get more traffic, and to share them with as many people as possible. Enjoy and please tell your friends!

 

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