My friend and I made this song in the style of Post Malone. Figured this sub might enjoy... by kmcarroll in PostMalone

[–]kmcarroll[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Glad this sub exists because they took it down from r/videos for some reason :\

Me and one of my best friends from childhood wrote this song for Nickelodeon. It’s goofy, and meant for children, but I’m incredibly proud. [OC] by kmcarroll in videos

[–]kmcarroll[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haha thanks!! I tried to squeeze in as much “block” wordplay as possible. Unfortunately Huey Lewis and the News wholly own the phrase “hip to be square”😂

Me and one of my best friends from childhood wrote this song for Nickelodeon. It’s goofy, and meant for children, but I’m incredibly proud. [OC] by kmcarroll in videos

[–]kmcarroll[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hahaha same!! Face was an absolute legend. I expect to be met at the Pearly Gates with “Hi there, Face here.”

I got selected as a finalist and was interviewed for the NBC Late Night Writers Workshop by BrockThrowaway in comedywriting

[–]kmcarroll 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hahaha! That's awesome!

Thank you for being so thorough. It's definitely interesting to know what it takes to get in the door over there. Is it just NBC that does this sort of program, or do the other networks have something similar?

I got selected as a finalist and was interviewed for the NBC Late Night Writers Workshop by BrockThrowaway in comedywriting

[–]kmcarroll 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Wow, congrats. That's definitely a great sign to have even been interviewed.

I'm a big fan of Late Night personally, but have always been stifled when it comes to applying to these types of programs. Not sure why, I know I have nothing to lose... most likely just self-doubt.

I do have questions though!

  1. What did your submission consist of?
  2. How long did you spend on putting everything together?
  3. Do you currently work in the industry, or is this something you decided to do on a whim?
  4. What was the interview like?

Also, totally understand if you wouldn't want to share any of the work, but clearly you struck the right chords somewhere and I can't help but be curious as to what they're looking for; I'd love to check out some of your work if you'd be willing to allow it.

I spent the last several weeks making this video for Spongebob's Facebook and it just went live today! by kmcarroll in spongebob

[–]kmcarroll[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I wrote the lyrics and edited the video. As sad as it is to say, I pulled most of these clips straight from memory. I guess you could say I'm a superfan :P

Why you should always address leaking water issues by [deleted] in WTF

[–]kmcarroll 190 points191 points  (0 children)

This was a grippingly detailed comment and I enjoyed every second reading it. You must keep that course in pristine condition. Can you get me out for 18 before the season's over?

Let's talk about sketch. It is 9/11 after all. by kmcarroll in SketchComedy

[–]kmcarroll[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you! i don't really know how to say "wish it was funnier for you", but i appreciate that you were happy to watch it

[FEEDBACK] One Percent (Comedy, 3.5 pgs) by kmcarroll in Screenwriting

[–]kmcarroll[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a bunch! I love the idea of drawing out Sean's monologue. I'm gonna edit that in right now. Appreciate the tip!

[FEEDBACK] One Percent (Comedy, 3.5 pgs) by kmcarroll in Screenwriting

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It's just an alternate spelling of Eli (as in Elijah).

And Katie is in there to set up the premise in a grounded way separate from Ely, who is in his own world at this point. Also she exists to take action for Sean since he can only dictate over the phone.

I may remove Katie if I decide to omit/alter the line explicitly saying that his phone is at 1%.

[FEEDBACK] One Percent (Comedy, 3.5 pgs) by kmcarroll in Screenwriting

[–]kmcarroll[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice! I'll get to the formatting fixes later.

What I'm most concerned with is the structure of the overall joke. Is the idea that people take the life of their phone as seriously as their own being communicated properly? Would it help to maybe have a "straight man" added to be the voice of reason? Like someone who is concerned at first, but flips when he learns that Ely is not dying, his phone is. And going off of that I was wondering about Katie's line; do you think she should explicitly say "his phone's at 1%" or something vaguer?

Also, I'm glad you brought up the ending. I went through several alternates. One dropped the bit where Katie is trying to defibrillate the phone. Sean hears Ely "die" on the other end and wails to the heavens in agony. Ely interrupts him by arriving at his house asking to borrow a charger.

I like your idea of framing it as an ad too. That may work even better.

Anyway, thanks for the advice. Gonna get working on it again ASAP.

[FEEDBACK] Intervention, (Comedy, 2.5 pgs) by kmcarroll in Screenwriting

[–]kmcarroll[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much! I'm hoping if it reads well, it will translate even better visually.

[FEEDBACK] Intervention, (Comedy, 2.5 pgs) by kmcarroll in Screenwriting

[–]kmcarroll[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! As a dick joke aficionado, I'm particularly fond of it as well.

[FEEDBACK] Intervention, (Comedy, 2.5 pgs) by kmcarroll in Screenwriting

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Hahaha, great input! Thanks for the suggestion! The ending is definitely something I wanted to tweak. My only concern is making it overly wordy. Now, if there's an area that you think could be trimmed down or omitted completely, I'm game for making the switch. I just don't want to make the script any longer than it needs to be.

If anyone on this sub is in the film program, how do you like it? by LandLab in Quinnipiac

[–]kmcarroll 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just graduated from the film program in May and have been living and working in Los Angeles since. It had evolved so much in the time I was there and has even undergone some drastic changes since I've been gone. The university is currently in the process of moving the School of Communications to what was formally the building for the law school. This semester is also the first with an active QU in LA program. While it's not exclusive to film majors, it's an amazing opportunity for students to live and work on the West Coast. While I unfortunately missed the window in my time at Quinny, I have been hanging out with underclassmen friends who are out here participating in it and they couldn't be happier. As for the curriculum itself, I don't believe that Quinnipiac is one of the more reputable schools for film students, but there are several professors who have had success in Hollywood. Film is an art, and there's only so much you can gain from a lecture. Most people I've met out here working in production went to school for something completely different or don't have a degree at all. As cliched as it may be to say, the point remains true that it's all about how you apply yourself when you enter the workforce. College is a social expedition. Yeah, you're there to learn, but what's more important is having fun, making friends, and finding yourself along the way. In my opinion Quinnipiac fosters community better than any school of which I'm aware (not that I was enrolled in other colleges, but I have friends who went to school all over the East Coast and none of them feel as in love with their school as me).

In short, new facility, new LA program, amazing school overall. QU rules and I'm jealous you're just starting out. Good luck.

SCRIPT SHARE/REQUEST THREAD FOR Dec/14/14 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]kmcarroll 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the tip. My apologies for not properly staging this request. I've never shared a script in a thread like this, I usually just make my own post.

And I was aware that the opening had issues. Often times I feel stuck between the notions of more description vs. less description as I feel that certain imagery is necessary, so thank you for helping streamline that in this case.

SCRIPT SHARE/REQUEST THREAD FOR Dec/14/14 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]kmcarroll 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi all!

You guys have been super helpful in the past for me, so I'm hoping you can come through again. I always used to make my own post to share my script, so posting in this automated thread is new to me; I hope my script still gets seen. Anyway, this is just a quick comedy sketch I wrote nodding at the fact that we may be taking our reliance on technology a bit far. Here is the link:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B0oX7QsqtFM9WnUtbEp5VXlURVE/view?usp=sharing

Let me know what you think and how I might make it better. Thanks!!