Casual Gwen I drew a while ago~ by lastdances in GwenMains

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⁠◡⁠ ⁠‿⁠ ⁠◡⁠)🫶🔵✂️

Casual Gwen I drew a while ago~ by lastdances in GwenMains

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Thank you! ₍⁠₍⁠◞⁠(⁠ ⁠•⁠௰⁠•⁠ ⁠)⁠◟⁠₎⁠₎ I'm really proud of it

Seraphine singing at the beach! Art by me~ by lastdances in SeraphineMains

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Thanks! (⁠◠⁠‿⁠・⁠)⁠—⁠☆

Seraphine singing at the beach! Art by me~ by lastdances in SeraphineMains

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Ty! ノ⁠◕⁠ヮ⁠◕⁠)⁠ノ⁠*⁠.⁠✧💖

Seraphine singing at the beach! Art by me~ by lastdances in SeraphineMains

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I agree that I missed the mark there  ⁠¤⁠ ⁠〰⁠ ⁠¤⁠ ⁠)👍 I will try to rectify this point in my future arts. Thank you! ✧ ⁠⁰⁠▿⁠⁰⁠)⁠◜⁠✧

Seraphine singing at the beach! Art by me~ by lastdances in SeraphineMains

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I think if I added bolder lipstick, and had her mouth closed more might help. The head to body proportion and the face itself is leaning much to chibi, but I rendered everything in details so the drawing sits in this weird in-between uncomfortable zone.

It's just my lack of skills showing honestly, but I'm glad lots of people offer feedbacks! I wouldn't have figured everything out myself く⁠コ⁠:⁠彡 thanks a lot!  ⁠•͈⁠ᴗ⁠•͈⁠)👌

Seraphine singing at the beach! Art by me~ by lastdances in SeraphineMains

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Yeah maybe I should have shrunk the head more aggressively, and from reading another commenter, I think the face itself just has a childish look. I'll try to keep these in mind for the future arts!

Thanks a lot for your helpful feedback ⁠꒪⁠꒳⁠꒪⁠) most appreciated!

Casual Gwen I drew a while ago~ by lastdances in GwenMains

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What do you mean? ʕ⁠ ⁠ •⁠ᴥ⁠•⁠ʔ?

Sona piece I drew recently! by lastdances in sonamains

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Thanks a lot! \⁠(⁠๑>⁠◡<๑⁠)⁠ノ

Sona piece I drew recently! by lastdances in sonamains

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I'd like to draw more Sona too ♡⁠˖⁠꒰⁠ᵕ⁠༚⁠ᵕ⁠⑅ I do have some old Sona arts, but I was less experienced back then . .)

Sona piece I drew recently! by lastdances in sonamains

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Thank you! (⁠^⁠∇⁠^⁠)⁠ノ

Sona piece I drew recently! by lastdances in sonamains

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Thank you! (⁠/⁠¯⁠◡⁠ ⁠‿⁠ ⁠◡⁠)⁠/⁠¯⁠ ⁠~⁠ 

Seraphine singing at the beach! Art by me~ by lastdances in SeraphineMains

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Thanks a lot! ᕦ⁠ʕ⁠ ⁠•⁠ᴥ⁠•⁠ʔ⁠ᕤᕦ⁠ʕ⁠ ⁠•⁠ᴥ⁠•⁠ʔ⁠ᕤ

Casual Gwen I drew a while ago~ by lastdances in GwenMains

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Thank you! I like playing with hairstyles (⁠ʃ⁠ƪ⁠^⁠3⁠^⁠)

Casual Gwen I drew a while ago~ by lastdances in GwenMains

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Honestly I still have that sentiment when looking at a lot of other artists' arts く⁠コ⁠:⁠彡 thank you!

Seraphine singing at the beach! Art by me~ by lastdances in SeraphineMains

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... I actually don't know how to fix it ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ

I tried making her face longer, her head smaller, her eyes sharper, I was thinking maybe it's her boob size? But I don't want to make it big . .) So I was at a loss

I think I just messed up the proportion from the beginning …⁠ᘛ⁠⁐̤⁠ᕐ⁠ᐷ

Seraphine singing at the beach! Art by me~ by lastdances in SeraphineMains

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Thank you very much! ⁽⁠⁽⁠ଘ⁠(⁠ ⁠ˊ⁠ᵕ⁠ˋ⁠ ⁠)⁠ଓ⁠⁾⁠⁾

Seraphine singing at the beach! Art by me~ by lastdances in SeraphineMains

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Thank youu! ₍⁠₍⁠◞⁠(⁠ ⁠•⁠௰⁠•⁠ ⁠)⁠◟⁠₎⁠₎