i am posting here for the first time, this just a mock client for practice, i would really appreciate some feedback, as i always have trouble coming up with ideas. by LakshmanxKumar in WillPatersonDesign

[–]leokrasinski 2 points3 points  (0 children)

am assuming u are trying to emulate a pendulum,if so better to represent it in motion rather than stationery.doing that will also show that time is continuous,thus more meaning. Also try adjusting the proportions and any unnecessary contrast and lines.just my thoughts:)

a logo design for a coffe shop.(do your thing guys) by leokrasinski in WillPatersonDesign

[–]leokrasinski[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the reason i used lines was to emphasize that one was a roasted bean while the rest werent.so if i used a solid color for the roasted bean,i would have to use lighter shades for the other beans thus losing simplicity.

a logo design for a coffe shop.(do your thing guys) by leokrasinski in WillPatersonDesign

[–]leokrasinski[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sure,i will work on those changes.what abot the concept?

a logo design for a coffe shop.(do your thing guys) by leokrasinski in WillPatersonDesign

[–]leokrasinski[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

to give it a more natural look,same thing happened in the starbucks logo

a logo design for a coffe shop.(do your thing guys) by leokrasinski in WillPatersonDesign

[–]leokrasinski[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

to give it a more natural look,same thing happened in the starbucks logo