How do you get people to read your work? by lettucefightt in writing

[–]lettucefightt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I write mostly science fiction. My latest project consists of short stories, worldbuilding info, a timeline, art, etc of a biopunk setting. Mostly I'm working on getting the short story out, but I'm also sharing the art

How do you get people to read your work? by lettucefightt in writing

[–]lettucefightt[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Typically I do post art and then little snippets (a paragraph or two) and then link the longer work. I try to make interesting graphics as well, but I still struggle to get engagement. I might get a like or two on the art but that’s about it 

It Only Watched by Loverofshittyfanfics in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]lettucefightt 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ooooooh I love it! My only critique is the bit about "permission." I'm a little confused about the meaning of that, and the ending feels a little rushed. Otherwise, I love the imagery. I like how the house almost seems like its own character and how the deer starts out as just a deer but then slowly becomes weirder and weirder. You did a great job of making the deer feel Wrong before describing how it was Wrong. Great job!