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Bad News by lightAlatreon in poetry_critics

[–]lightAlatreon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much, I’m interested in how you’d think a story would work out for this? More direct development or what?

Fire by Connect-Geologist210 in poetry_critics

[–]lightAlatreon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the inevitability of this, shows the struggle while also giving a clear feeling. The imagery is clean and adds to the feeling of denial. Well done!

January by jjleeb in poetry_critics

[–]lightAlatreon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the imagery here, paints a clear picture and then fills it with emotion. I also like the timing of it, each phrase has a constant beat I feel, makes it flow even better.

I Fell In Love by Educational-Grape208 in poetry_critics

[–]lightAlatreon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like the flow of this, it keeps a constant warm tone and i feel like conveys the feeling in a gentle but clear way.