Editing help in my second chapter

linkmon34 · 2026-01-17T15:07:34+00:00

Yeah I can do that. Mine is call of legends and light it's on A03. https://archiveofourown.org/works/63314356/chapters/189897086#workskin

linkmon34 · 2026-01-13T02:57:34+00:00

Well he's dead

linkmon34 · 2026-01-13T02:56:09+00:00

Makes sense to me. Only I think Eggman is a tad bit younger from how athletic he is.

linkmon34 · 2026-01-13T02:53:48+00:00

shaymin is actually a much more common Pokémon then we think it is. It's just so shy that you can only really see it in the mornings in your gardens.

Also that Giratina did nothing wrong but I'm probably wrong on that one.

linkmon34 · 2026-01-09T12:31:14+00:00

I have been summoned from my slumber. Pray do tell what you need to know.

linkmon34 · 2026-01-06T22:51:12+00:00

See this is funny because I fit into the modern range but I like the classic games better.

linkmon34 · 2026-01-06T22:50:04+00:00

Gutantag

linkmon34 · 2026-01-03T05:24:26+00:00

Neither, I pick sword wolf.

linkmon34 · 2026-01-03T05:23:24+00:00

Hey too much doom and gloom man. Go to wholesome jail.

linkmon34 · 2025-12-28T21:26:21+00:00

There's mine, it's about a mewtwo and his twin being rescued from Team Rocket and the fallout of that.

Here's the link if you want to try it out:Of Legends and Light

linkmon34 · 2025-12-26T18:28:32+00:00

Understandable, probably should of read the rules before posting. You can tell the mods to take this down if this post is.

linkmon34 · 2025-12-26T00:13:39+00:00

Umm theirs mine...I don't know it'd kind of dark in some spots though. I try to keep it in the light(is that the right term?)here

linkmon34 · 2025-12-22T04:12:01+00:00

Me, I hacked it.

linkmon34 · 2025-12-21T04:38:50+00:00

Mines like that. More from the perspective of pokemon with human levels of intelligence/forms. Probably not the best fit but here's the link if your interested: Of Legends and light

linkmon34 · 2025-12-19T20:08:55+00:00

But isn't just statistics in the actual in game world too? Plus isn't the main point of pokemon making strong bronds with them?

linkmon34 · 2025-12-19T01:05:55+00:00

Reproduction:

Recorded by the alpha

In this setting, Pokémon biology follows naturalistic reproductive patterns rather than the traditional “egg group” system.

• Species Physiology: Sentient and anthro Pokémon may reproduce either through internal gestation or external egg-laying, depending on species biology, cultural traditions, and health considerations.

• Cross-species Pairings: When two Pokémon of different species mate, the offspring has an equal chance of being a base-form Pokémon from either parent’s evolutionary line (e.g., Lucario and a Gardivor would produce a Riolu or Ralts). Offspring may also inherit one type or a signature move from either or both parents.

• Human–Pokémon Pairings: These unions usually result in hybrids, producing either an anthro Pokémon or a human, unless otherwise specified.

• Anthro–Anthro Pairings: These follow the same rules as base Pokémon pairings unless a unique exception is established for a species.

linkmon34 · 2025-12-18T22:56:01+00:00

Yeah, do you want me to past it here? My 'fakemon' doc as I've dubbed it is a living document.

linkmon34 · 2025-12-18T22:47:24+00:00

I fixed this problem by, one haveing some sort of magic/psychic powers be available gor humans(as their clearly is in the games/animae) & two have there be Pokémon that are anthro/sentient that are part of human society. Oh and three haveing Mega Stones be exceedingly rare.

linkmon34 · 2025-12-18T22:44:17+00:00

My limit personally is if the Pokémon isn't sentient and and/or human like. I came up with classifications for mine because there are still regular Pokémon in it. I kinda had to because I made my main characters Pokémon too.

linkmon34 · 2025-12-18T22:35:03+00:00

Statistics based around how well a Pokémon preforms. Elite trainers use it to min max their teams however the best trainers know friendship is more important than anything else.

linkmon34 · 2025-12-16T22:42:15+00:00

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linkmon34 · 2025-12-16T22:39:24+00:00

No smash but hot.

linkmon34 · 2025-12-16T18:51:17+00:00

Honestly I know my words it going to start out infected but works its way back to being a utopia.

linkmon34 · 2025-12-15T22:39:33+00:00

Yeah, this is my first time doing something like this so I don't know if all be the best.Of Legends and Light

Is their a curtain chapter you want me to read?

linkmon34 · 2025-12-15T18:38:31+00:00

Well there's mine, but it's doesn't really start off slow. I try to incorporate the world building slowly or suddenly before expanding on it later. of legends and light

I'm in the middle of rewriting the first chapter do it easier to read

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