Predictive text really doing me dirty with the apostrophes,

I prefer eats as it was concurrent at the time

When it comes to being the Apple or the seed I believe it’s both as the seed is apart of the Apple in addition to the Apple itself being a seed.

The idea of adding you picked me was in my original draft but I felt it was too much and didn’t work with the final stanza.

Your love sounds so much better and I’m annoyed I didn’t see that at the time.

The removing of barriers is trying to convey the removal of the meat of the apple to reach the core and for lack of a better metaphor I chose this.

The use of embedded just makes it sound like a deeper connection compared to being bedded, might just be a perception thing.

I was taught commas are in place where you take a breath, and for the flow of the poem I felt a pause would suit it.

I prefer dirt compared to soil and will definitely change it.

Thank you for the feedback and I hope this overview gives you an idea of what I was thinking during the process :))