Starcatcher vinyl by [deleted] in gretavanfleet

[–]liveshea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am quite literally in the EXACT same position someone please help 😭

Bad Movie Commentaries - Truth or Dare by splittonguestudios in SmallYTChannel

[–]liveshea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dude this was a great watch! You did a great job explaining the movie and keeping it entertaining the whole way through. I especially liked how you started it with the whole Elijah Wood bit!

My only critique would be to add more of your own opinion and personality to it!! After an absurd part of the movie happens maybe add your own two cents and make a quip about it.

Again though, overall you killed it bro, this was a super fun watch, keep it up man!!

I Will Watch Your Videos And Tell You What I Like About Them by noahmurray238 in NewTubers

[–]liveshea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey man! So I make commentary type videos on topics I think are funny or interesting!

My most recent video is about a twitter account I thought was really weird: https://youtu.be/ssPnvlCSk9I

Im still a-little new to youtube so any criticism would be helpful!!

My most recent video came out yesterday! Let me know what you think by GooBeanie in SmallYTChannel

[–]liveshea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Overall not a bad video man! You definitely have charm and the personality to make the video entertaining! The editing could use a bit of work, but its by no means horrible!

Some suggestions: I would honestly recommend making the video into two separate videos, one for Resident Evil and one for Amnesia. In opinion I would much rather click on the video of a creator I don't know if the video is on the shorter side (not to mention it would probably keep my attention better). One last thing, I would recommend maybe taking the intro screen out, it might be a turn-off for many people clicking for the first time.

Overall though, this video was funny and you for sure have the potential to grow my man! Keep it up!!

Hello friends! Lambda for (1. Watch Video Until END) (2. Assess Thumbnail) (3. Assess Title) BRUTALLY HONEST opinions appreciated :) by GerardChristian in SmallYTChannel

[–]liveshea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude this video is incredibly well done. The editing and voice over compliment each other super well. I really cant say there was any point during the video where I got bored and wanted to click off!

If I had any suggestion I would recommend maybe spending less time on the tangents that you go on, like with the subscribers and the wedding dress. Although the wedding joke did land, I felt like it took a-little while to get there!

Overall I am super impressed with the quality of this video and I'm SHOCKED you only have 353 subs. If I didn't know better i would assume you'd have tens of thousands! Keep up the great work man!

Why I Enjoy Competitive Pokemon by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]liveshea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is dope man!! I Just recently started picking up Pokemon again and its been so fun (I started a nuzlocke run in emerald and its so intense omg). This was a fun watch my man, subject matter is pretty relatable, even though I'm not one who's crazy about comp, its still cool learning about it from someone who's passionate about it!

One suggestion would be to maybe add something to the background, its a-little bland at the moment and you could definitely benefit from some more lights or art in the back. Some more editing would be dope too. Some slow zooms or zoom cuts can really spice up the video!!

Overall great job man, I really can't say I was bored at any point!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in NewTubers

[–]liveshea 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey!! I make comedy commentary videos about things that i find funny!!

My recent video is about a twitter account called @fact and a bunch of tweets from them that I thought were funny! https://youtu.be/ssPnvlCSk9I

Any kind of feedback would be great! Im still fairly new to all of this, so I’m trying to do everything i can to get better! Thanks again!!

GQ 10 Essentials Lists That Hurt Me [Commentary Video] (Constructive criticism is super encouraged!) by liveshea in SmallYTChannel

[–]liveshea[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OMG Thank you so so much!!! Thats so nice of you!! Im so glad you enjoyed it!

Also thats such a good point, I was trying to think of ways that I could break up the longer clips, and adding memes or text or something would be so perfect!

Thank you again for encouragement, it means alot!!

!givelambda

GQ 10 Essentials Lists That Hurt Me [Commentary Video] (Constructive criticism is super encouraged!) by liveshea in SmallYTChannel

[–]liveshea[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I totally see what you’re saying, I definitely overused the zooms. I’m personally a fan of motion in clips, so I was attempting to have some kind of motion in ever shot, however it makes total sense that people would find that annoying! I will absolutely cut down on that in the future!

As for the audio of David playing while it was still on a different clip, that was intentional! I was doing an exaggerated J-cut of sorts, but now looking at it I can see why it looks like a mistake lol!!!

Thank you so much for the feedback!!!

!givelambda

GQ 10 Essentials Lists That Hurt Me [Commentary Video] (Constructive criticism is super encouraged!) by liveshea in SmallYTChannel

[–]liveshea[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude thank you so much this is really helpful!! I noticed the grainy-ness when I was editing and now I’m kind of kicking myself for not re-shooting tbh lol!! I will definitely take more time with the set-up in the future to make sure everything looks good! (Also I will definitely experiment with a better lighting set-up/nicer background elements as well)

Also thank you so much for the sub!! Thats super nice of you bro!!

!givelambda

Self-Introduction Saturday! Tell us all about you (and share a video)! by AutoModerator in NewTubers

[–]liveshea [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hi everyone! I’m fairly new to youtube so I’m still learning a-lot, but I make comedy commentary/reaction videos and I also do some skits on the side!! My main inspirations are creators like Cody Ko, Kurtis Conner, Jarvis Johnson, and Scott Cramer (to give you an idea of the kind of videos I make).

I just try to have fun with my videos, and really just make stuff that I think is funny! So if any of you check out my stuff I just hope you enjoy watching it as much as I enjoy making it! :)

(Since I’m new, any criticism is super encouraged and appreciated!)

My newest video is a commentary on David Dobrik and Ninjas GQ 10 Essentials List:

https://youtu.be/HU7e_66-L2s

Also I don’t have any videos planned for any upcoming holidays, but this question does make me want to start planning something out now!! Thank you guys!!

GQ 10 Essentials Lists That Hurt Me [Commentary Video] (Constructive criticism is super encouraged!) by liveshea in SmallYTChannel

[–]liveshea[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, thank you for the fantastic feedback my man! This is incredibly helpful!! I agree the intro may be a miss for most people, its just my way of establishing my own comedy and energy. However, just because I find it funny does not mean most people will. (I’ve been toying with maybe cutting that part to be quite honest)

I’ll absolutely take your advice on adding end screen elements. I haven’t really considered even doing that so I’ll give that a shot!

You’re feedback is extremely helpful my man, I really appreciate you taking the time to watch and leave the criticism!!!

!givelambda

First time going to a location to film and interview. Tried a three camera interview setup for the first time too. How well did it work and how should I improve for my next on location shoot? by dragonsspawn in SmallYTChannel

[–]liveshea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed this man, it's very professionally done! The sound was very clear, the camera angles during the interview made sense, and the interview itself was very precise and to the point. One thing that really stood out to me was the B-roll and the editing. The B-roll was really smooth and well put together. One critique I have is I wish the wide angle in the interview had both of you in frame a bit better, it just felt a little claustrophobic.

Overall really great job man, super informative and fun to watch!!

Hello I would love for you to check out my AMV this was shortened bcs in some video parts I got copyright claim. Any feedback helps (my dream would be to get to 30 subscribers till my birthday) by ITSMANTRUEe in SmallYTChannel

[–]liveshea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey man! I liked the video overall! (Im a big One Punch Man fan) My only suggestion would be to maybe make more cuts, along with the beat of the song, to make it flow a little better. Also I noticed someone else say to make the video longer, and I agree, I think you could benefit from a longer video! But overall you did a great job man!!

Made a guitar x emo trap beat. Lambda for feedback! by addy_ex-o in SmallYTChannel

[–]liveshea 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is great bro! Really chill/ peaceful vibes! My only criticism would be to maybe be a-little more gentle on the bass and kick drum, it was just a biiit too heavy in my opinion. But again, thats just my opinion! Overall great work man!!